05-11-2018, 11:53 AM
(05-07-2018, 01:49 AM)Illidan Stormrage Wrote: Thanks Blink, appreciate it. Got one more.
http://omniverse-rpg.com/showthread.php?tid=7808
Snakes and Ladders
Quest or Personal Storyline? Personal Storyline
Participating characters: Illidan
Total character count including spaces: 142,947
Total word count: 24,573
(05-07-2018, 01:53 AM)Cell Wrote: http://omniverse-rpg.com/showthread.php?tid=9482
Convalescense
Quest or Personal Storyline? Personal Storyline
Participating characters: Cell
Total character count including spaces: 24,428
Total word count: 4,321
Sorry for not giving proper feedback. If you would like some more detailed comments and criticisms, PM me and I'll write something up.
An overarching theme is that you can sometimes overdescribe things and it can take away from the scene itself, ironically enough. However, your writing still is excellent.
Illidan - Excemplary - 2858.54
Cell - Great- 244.28