Move Approval V

[Dane Regan]

Projectile Deflection -300 OM (Ranged Attack Proficiency)
Vash, using his sharp senses and wit, can predict where many projectiles will end up. By throwing rocks or other hard objects in his vicinity Vash can deflect individual physical projectiles such as bullets, arrows, bolts, or other forms of small ballistic munitions one at a time. This will only work if Vash can see the source of the projectile and focuses on performing this action (unless it moves at an exorbitantly slow pace), it isn't excessively large, his TEC determines how effective and the amount of focus required to perform this.

I think you're still missing a couple of things, but these small changes should fix that:

Projectile Deflection -300 OM (Ranged Attack Proficiency)
Vash, using his sharp senses and wit, can predict where many projectiles will end up. By throwing rocks or other hard objects in his vicinity at an intecepting velocity, Vash can deflect individual projectiles such as bullets, arrows, bolts, or other forms of small ballistic munitions one at a time, including small spells or laser bolts. This will only work if Vash can see the source of the projectile and is focusing on the shooter the moment they fire (unless the projectile moves at an exorbitantly slow pace). His TEC determines effectiveness and the amount of focus required to perform this, with faster projectiles being harder to deflect. Throwing rocks quickly enough to deflect bullets and other fast projectiles can put a strain on his arm, especially if done repetitively.

Added:
>"at an intercepting velocity" to make it clear that he can throw rocks fast enough to block the bullets
>"is focusing on the shooter the moment they fire" so he can react effectively
>"Throwing rocks quickly enough to deflect bullets can put a strain on his arm" to make it clear he can't become immune to bullets and keep doing this indefinitely
>"with faster projectiles being harder to deflect" obviously, the converse is also true

I also removed the reference to a projectile needing to be "physical". Since I don't see why this wouldn't block a small laser bolt (as long as it's not travelling at light speed or something).

If you're cool with that, you can link and use the quoted version of the move I wrote above. If not, go ahead and rephrase stuff you don't like, then repost it again.