Roster Advice

[Handsome Jack]

Zack Fair

1st page: nice color work, though I'd probably have made Consumed OM red instead of Spent OM. Could use a Quick Guide, but otherwise solid.

2nd page: approximately how tall is Zack? Your description could use some fleshing out, but it's short and concise so this way you don't need cliffnotes. I got no critique for the rest.

3rd page: Nice use of links to send people to the approval post for the Move. The altered size on the prices is also pleasing. I kind of wish it had some pictures to go along with everything though. Otherwise, solid.

4th page: This is a solid NPC page that everyone should look at as an example. No complaints. The rest of the page is solid too.

5th page: You might benefit from adding a summary of the threads after each one, but otherwise this is another good page.

6th page: Nice list of tips.

7th page: So many broken links... and Acheivement pages are outdated now. But hey, you do you.

Overall: Why did you need me to critique this again? All you really need is some prettying up and you'll have a perfect roster