05-04-2018, 08:57 AM
(04-01-2018, 07:07 PM)Dane Regan Wrote: @Sage: Fair enough. I wasn't trying to cheat the system or anything with my Ebony thread since it wasn't graded originally. Like, I wouldn't resubmit something that got great in the hopes of exemp, or something with no quality bonus in the hopes of getting one again or getting an improvement to a previous grading. I was just looking for a stamp saying 'you dun kinda gud' and a bit of OM, since I'm genuinely pretty proud of it.
@Ash: I'll leave your thread for someone else.
(03-29-2018, 07:45 PM)Clownpiece Wrote: It only took like, 6 months, but here we are >.>
Submitting for a possible bonus.
Thread Name: Aftermath
Quest or Personal Storyline: Personal
Participating Characters: Clownpiece
Total Word Count: 8388
Total Character Count: 48218
Link to Thread: http://omniverse-rpg.com/showthread.php?tid=9108
I judge this thread to be worthy of an exemplary bonus! Because it was simultaneously kinda funny, but also serious. And a genuinely good read. Any writing errors were sparse.
Clownpiece: 964.36 OM
(03-31-2018, 02:31 PM)Serraph Quarrere Wrote: Link to topic: Armata de Strigoi
Quest or Personal Storyline?: Personal Storyline
Participating characters (please list): Serraph Quarrer
Total character count including spaces: 33,453
Total word count: 7,390
I want to submit my thread above for grading and for whatever potential bonus exists~
Thank you guys for your hard work!
I got a different character/word count here. Are you sure you counted spaces? Either way, my numbers were 7166 words / 40704 characters (with wordcounter.net). Your writing was awesome, especially the dialogue, but my main irk is that there are occasional random spaces in your writing. Like a double space between two words seemingly at random, and a space before a comma on occasions. Outside of that, I didn't spot any recurring 'mistakes'.
Anyway, I judge this worthy of a great bonus (the highest one you're eligible for based on word count).
Serraph Quarrere: 407.04 OM
A more senior staffer will dish out your rewards later.
(04-16-2018, 12:05 PM)Dane Regan Wrote: Just a friendly reminder that OM hasn't been given out for these:
(04-01-2018, 07:07 PM)Dane Regan Wrote: @Sage: Fair enough. I wasn't trying to cheat the system or anything with my Ebony thread since it wasn't graded originally. Like, I wouldn't resubmit something that got great in the hopes of exemp, or something with no quality bonus in the hopes of getting one again or getting an improvement to a previous grading. I was just looking for a stamp saying 'you dun kinda gud' and a bit of OM, since I'm genuinely pretty proud of it.[spoiler]
@Ash: I'll leave your thread for someone else.
(03-29-2018, 07:45 PM)Clownpiece Wrote: It only took like, 6 months, but here we are >.>
Submitting for a possible bonus.
Thread Name: Aftermath
Quest or Personal Storyline: Personal
Participating Characters: Clownpiece
Total Word Count: 8388
Total Character Count: 48218
Link to Thread: http://omniverse-rpg.com/showthread.php?tid=9108
I judge this thread to be worthy of an exemplary bonus! Because it was simultaneously kinda funny, but also serious. And a genuinely good read. Any writing errors were sparse.
Clownpiece: 964.36 OM
(03-31-2018, 02:31 PM)Serraph Quarrere Wrote: Link to topic: Armata de Strigoi
Quest or Personal Storyline?: Personal Storyline
Participating characters (please list): Serraph Quarrer
Total character count including spaces: 33,453
Total word count: 7,390
I want to submit my thread above for grading and for whatever potential bonus exists~
Thank you guys for your hard work!
I got a different character/word count here. Are you sure you counted spaces? Either way, my numbers were 7166 words / 40704 characters (with wordcounter.net). Your writing was awesome, especially the dialogue, but my main irk is that there are occasional random spaces in your writing. Like a double space between two words seemingly at random, and a space before a comma on occasions. Outside of that, I didn't spot any recurring 'mistakes'.
Anyway, I judge this worthy of a great bonus (the highest one you're eligible for based on word count).
Serraph Quarrere: 407.04 OM
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A more senior staffer will dish out your rewards later.
And now for all the newer stuff:
(04-02-2018, 11:03 AM)Ash Williams Wrote: Link to Topic: http://omniverse-rpg.com/showthread.php?tid=9504
Quest or Personal Storyline: Personal Storyline
Participating Characters: Ash Williams, Celestia, Revan
Total Word Count: Ash Williams (25,191), Revan (17,898), Celestia (18,506)
Total Character Count: Ash Williams (4,621), Revan (3,291), Celestia (3,290)
wordcounter.net was used
A fun read. Only Ash Williams qualifies for a Great bonus, and his posts were well written and proofread so I have no problem awarding it to him.
Ash Williams: 503.82 OM (Great + Participation)
Revan Noctis: 178.98 OM (Participation)
Celestia: 185.06 OM (Participation)
(04-02-2018, 02:27 PM)Ahana Varma Wrote: Thread Name: [M] Chosen by God: I Always Knew I Was Awesome
Quest or Personal Storyline: Personal
Participating Characters: Ahana Varma
Total Word Count: 4,230 (according to WordCounter.net)
Total Character Count: 22,981 (according to WordCounter.net)
That's a nice post you got there. Anyway, well proofread and written as usual. Have fun with your new character.
Ahana Varma: 229.81 OM (Great)
(04-04-2018, 09:18 PM)Kumoko Wrote: Turning in this thread for Participation Bonuses
And I'd like for my work to be judged. (Viola doesn't have the wordcount, unfortunately)
Thread Name: Reborn as a Spider Once Again
Quest or Personal Storyline: Personal
Participating Characters: Kumoko, Viola
Total Word Count:
Kumoko: 5474
Viola: 1354
Total Character Count:
Kumoko: 28997
Viola: 7868
Link to Thread: http://omniverse-rpg.com/showthread.php?tid=9855
Admittedly, I wrote Viola so I did participate in this thread. But, I really enjoy Kumoko's writing. He did a good job with this, so I'm awarding Kumoko a great bonus. (The reason for Viola's lower wordcount is that some of her posts were in the Kopaka+Dawn vs Pennywise thread - although Kumoko was reacting to them. So I'd Kumoko does deserve the participation bonus on all his posts.)
Kumoko: 579.94 OM (Great + Participation)
Viola: 78.68 OM (Participation)
(04-09-2018, 11:47 AM)Shantotto Wrote: Link to topicInto the woods
Quest or Personal Storyline?: Personal storyline
Participating characters (please list): Shantotto, Rafael Esquivel
Total character count including spaces: Shantotto (34,092) Rafael Esquivel (20,112)
Total word count: Shantotto (6,450) Rafael Esquivel (3,756)
Shantotto is making an effort to proofread better, and his posts are less "messy" than with the Hecate thread he submitted for great a while back. So, since he's clearly responded to the feedback, I'm giving Shantotto a great bonus. For the participation bonus, his first 6 posts don't qualify [1856 words/10128 characters] (since Shan was solo and not with Raf).
Shantotto: 479.28 OM (Posts 7 and onwards, Great + Participation) + 101.28 OM (Posts 1 to 6, Great) = 580.56 OM
Rafael Esquivel: 201.12 OM (Participation)
A higher up will dish out the OM for you guys later.
@Ash: I'd definitely vouch for giving your quest exemplary, but I'm not as great with feedback and the like, hence why I think you deserve to hear that from another staffer. Either way, you should be good to go see Diablo.
(04-17-2018, 09:27 PM)Dane Regan Wrote:(04-12-2018, 11:35 AM)Ash Wrote: UPDATED!!!
Honeymoon In Hell
Quest: Completed w/ Permission.
Participating characters (please list):
Ash the Storm Demon
Desman Black
Ash the Storm Demon
Total character count including spaces: 184,736
Total word count: 34,299
Desman Black
Total characters count including spaces: 158,759
Total word count: 29,424
Completed Quest
63,723 words; 343,495 characters.
Requesting Diablo for Ash.
Requesting Diablo for Desman. (In Character a Month Later)
<3~!
Despite what I said earlier about being more tentative, I am going to grade this thread exemplary (both Desman and Ash). You've got the content, quality, and wordcount easily. I might not be the best at feedback, but you definitely deserve your grading. Another staffer (likely Alex or Trixie, I think) will handle your meetings with Diablo.
On the assumption that neither of you will be posting in the thread again, your bonuses (exemp+participation, +150%) are:
Ash: 5542.08 OM
Desman: 4762.77 OM
I'll be going into your logs and updating these OM's note to self. The people who haven't been graded/looked at have still not been looked at

