Move Approval V

[Serraph Quarrere]

It doesn't dodge anything or weave around anything. If Serraph sees a target, he fires the cero in the direction of the target. The ziggity zaggity motion of the blast is merely for flavor and isn't quite enough to outright dodge anything in its way. I apologize if this is misleading and I'll try and reword this if you suggest this! ^-^

Nah, I think I was just having a silly moment there. You're good. It does clearly say "straight line". I just misread the bit at the end (for some reason, I thought "at anything within line of sight" meant it hit everything within line of sight, when it obviously doesn't. Sorry dude. That said, maybe it would be best to add in a little bit just in case. Like this:

T1 Super Attack: Cero (Requires: Ranged Proficiency, Area Proficiency, 600 OM): A glowing crimson light emanates from Serraph's form coalescing and concentrating on a single point on Serraph's body or his Zanpakuto. This mass of blood red spiritual energy collects in a sphere and implodes upon itself during the charging process, which takes four seconds, before bursting forward in a straight line towards its target. The structure of the attack is not a smooth beam of energy but an erratic, jaggedly moving, 4 foot wide, blast similar to the common idea of a bolt of lightning's appearance. The zig-zagging motion of the blast isn't quite enough to outright dodge anything in its way. The blast itself moves at an average speed of about 85 mph and can be aimed at anything within line of sight.

^You can consider this to be approved, and just quote this post if you want. Or go ahead and rephrase that.

All For One - 300 OM - Buff, Mimic
[spoiler]
Serraph may "teach" a single move he knows to someone else via three seconds of physical contact. This includes any move he has learned from Mimic. Anyone he teaches will only have access to the move for a half-hour in character. If the hour-limit on a Mimicked move runs out, anyone he has taught the copied move will also no longer be able to use it. 

If the person he is teaching doesn't have the required proficiency or powers to learn the move, they will temporarily gain them in relation to the move, and the move alone. If he teaches a move that requires "Flight" they will be able to fly only when actively using the taught move. He can only give one move per person. If someone is already using a move that was given to them by All For One, and Serraph uses All For One on them again, the first move will be erased from that person and replaced with the new move. 

It is only really comfortable or safe to use All For One once every half-hour, but he is able to use it more often than that. When he performs All For One, he feels sick. Performing it in rapid succession will have the effect of making this feeling of sickness increase, after five uses within ten minutes, he will become dizzy and unable to walk. If he uses it ten times within ten minutes he will become physically ill, prone to spitting up blood, and intensely dizzy, unable to move. Using it twenty times within ten minutes will cause him to lose consciousness for at least eight hours, or if already wounded, die. 

 I perma-bought via mimic this a while back in this thread from All Might's NPC Prime, "Teacher" It was brought to my attention I should run it through approval, didn't know that. I do apologize, but if there is any question to the validity of when I bought this move, here is my purchase log for that day.
I changed the names in that particular move. Nothing else is changed.[/spoiler]

You're good. The only problem with your log was that an approval to the move isn't linked there. You can't just link a character and say "I'm buying their move". You've gotta link the approval link. That said, I assume the original move was approved in the NPC workshop and thus there wasn't a link for you to use - so at the time you should have just copy pasted it over here and asked for someone to give you the thumbs up so you could have an official approval link.

Anyway, just make a post in your log linking to this post here as that moves approval (even though you've already bought it).

I appreciate the info. At the time I didn't know. Its not as if I didn't ask, I did ask him prior to this and he gave me the heads up. Thanks again.