05-02-2018, 07:43 PM
(05-02-2018, 07:39 PM)Rafael Esquivel Wrote: D.E. Orb (300, Ranged Proficiency, Homing Prof. ):
A Basketball sized orb of Dark Energon that can be generated by Rafael, or Unicron. Manifesting the orb into existence takes about seven seconds, and requires the complete concentration of Rafael, or Unicron. This means that they cannot do anything while making the orb. The orb travels at the speed of an arrow and can home in an opponent. [How? You'll need to explain how they shoot it, and how well it homes in. Does it have a big turning circle? Does it zig-zag? Etc.] The orb has a range of 56 feet. It is very draining on his stamina and so he cannot spam the orbs at an opponent, even if he wanted to do so.
D.E. Air Cutter (300, Ranged Proficiency, Homing Proficiency):
Aircutter is an attack Rafael can do by channeling Dark Energon into the air around him, a process that takes about 5 seconds to successfully perform. During the time of performing the process, Rafael cannot dodge, nor attack, nor do anything. However, this allows him to generate 30 crescent shaped blades of air that are about the size of horses each, that he can send at an opponent. [Are they all sent at once? Or one after another?] Each travels at the speed of an arrow, and homes in. [How? You'll need to explain how well it homes in. Does it have a big turning circle? Does it zig-zag? Etc.] These do a fair amount of damage.
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