04-22-2018, 09:40 PM
Would this work better?
Once entering throug h either of the Gates, anyone who desires to travel to the broken city must undertake a half a day's journey via vehicle or many days of walking. The city seems to be another half-day's journey from that of the Town With No Name. Nippur grew quickly after its founding and attracted settlers from the more remote parts of the Dunes seeking refuge beneath the leadership of a man deemed a 'controversial' individual due to his penchant for violence and strong-armed responses to opposition. Nippur resembles an ancient Middle Eastern town, with sandstone walls, temples, and other various structures. Like many locations in the Omniverse, its culture is not homogenous, and there are plenty of more 'modern' structures, utilities, and services.
Once entering throug h either of the Gates, anyone who desires to travel to the broken city must undertake a half a day's journey via vehicle or many days of walking. The city seems to be another half-day's journey from that of the Town With No Name. Nippur grew quickly after its founding and attracted settlers from the more remote parts of the Dunes seeking refuge beneath the leadership of a man deemed a 'controversial' individual due to his penchant for violence and strong-armed responses to opposition. Nippur resembles an ancient Middle Eastern town, with sandstone walls, temples, and other various structures. Like many locations in the Omniverse, its culture is not homogenous, and there are plenty of more 'modern' structures, utilities, and services.
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- Credit to Ezzy