04-22-2018, 09:13 PM
(04-22-2018, 04:12 PM)Warren Zimmer Wrote: C - Carver (600 OM, Physical Strength, Debuff, Telepathy.):
This sword weighs 2.4 pounds. The length of the blade is 75 centimeters. The total length of the sword is 90 Centimeters. The sword possesses a debuff that takes about 5 seconds to charge up during which he has to focus completely and cannot move, dodge, block, attack or even speak due to it requiring his full concentration. The debuff simply causes people to be more afraid of the sword each time they are hit with it. The fear affect just makes them feel mildly at unease at first, but a few solid hits will make them want to run away. They can still attack Warren, but are compelled to keep their distance. The sword maintains this fear effect for 5 seconds, and anyone affected will slowly become less scared over the course of 15 seconds of not being hit. The strength of the debuff is based on Warren's TEC and the opponent's, with anyone with double Warren's TEC becoming immune while someone with half his TEC will likely try to flee after a small scratch. The sword was purchased from a merchant in the Endless Dunes by Warren Zimmer, along with other weapons for his own personal use.
Tier 1 Super Move "Die" [Add the cost and profs/powers needed]
An orb of purple energy that is the size of an inflatable beachball that Warren can create roughly 15 feet away from his body, typically he has it hover over one hand. The orb then is sent at an opponent after he spends 2 seconds creating it. Once the orb reaches an opponent, it detonates with enough power that only a Tier One Super Defense, or higher could block it. The explosion has a radius of ten feet with the opponent in the center. Takes eight seconds to charge. While charging Warren has to focus a moderate amount but can still execute basic dodges, blocks, and attacks and partially use other moves/powers with lower concentration requirements.
Warren, please. If you don't understand something I said, say so. Don't just ignore the comment and leave things as is. I can understand missing some things I say every so often, but I won't keep providing comments here if you just blow them off without even acknowledging them. I know some notes I've added have been completely ignored about 3 times in a row or more at times. Maybe I overlooked something, maybe I didn't. But, either way, I won't know unless you tell me. Heck, in some instances you left my comments inside your move description without acting on them. Please take the time to preview your posts and read through them before you hit send, it can make a world of difference.
I'll get to your Chained/Unchained Chaos moves later. I added in edits for your fear sword. Those should work. Or change it to suit your needs if you want.