04-21-2018, 10:54 AM
If I reduced it down to
Cloak of midnight: 300 OM (Ranged Proficiency / Debuff proficiency / Area attack /ranged materialize ) Shantotto focuses her magic for four seconds to create a ring around someone with a diameter up to 15 feet. This ring is static and does not move. A wall of jet black magic shoots up 25 feet along the ring obscuring anything inside the ring from view. This ring lasts for an initial time of ten seconds. during which Shantotto can only walk and use her stardust rod. Any friend or foe passing through the wall is would feel nausea and slight weakness similar to if one had the flu for 5 seconds. Living things are blinded for three seconds after passing through the wall. This spell has a 45 foot range.
This spell does no damage.
The initial charge of ten seconds takes a moderate amount of mana to use and it drains Shantotto as if she performed a 50m dash. further sustaining the of the spell drains at a similar rate.
would that be better?
Cloak of midnight: 300 OM (Ranged Proficiency / Debuff proficiency / Area attack /ranged materialize ) Shantotto focuses her magic for four seconds to create a ring around someone with a diameter up to 15 feet. This ring is static and does not move. A wall of jet black magic shoots up 25 feet along the ring obscuring anything inside the ring from view. This ring lasts for an initial time of ten seconds. during which Shantotto can only walk and use her stardust rod. Any friend or foe passing through the wall is would feel nausea and slight weakness similar to if one had the flu for 5 seconds. Living things are blinded for three seconds after passing through the wall. This spell has a 45 foot range.
This spell does no damage.
The initial charge of ten seconds takes a moderate amount of mana to use and it drains Shantotto as if she performed a 50m dash. further sustaining the of the spell drains at a similar rate.
would that be better?