Move Creation Workshop

[Dane Regan]

The Dark Energon Dagger (Physical Strength, Ranged, Master Acrobat 600): 
The Dark Energon Dagger is a weapon that Unicron created out of Dark Energon. A short weapon with a 15 inch blade that had a gray, and purple wrapped leather handle. The blade is made out of stone, and Dark Energon.  This dagger takes him about 3 seconds to manifest. It can clash with the likes of Lightsabers, and similar. However, that is not the only trick that Unicron has up Rafael's sleeve with this. See, these daggers are made to be lighter weight than the sword that Rafael normally wields, and thus more quickly able to be used at the cost of being weaker. Two of them are hidden up each of his sleeves, and one in his boots, as well. Two are belted at his waist. They can be used as throwing weapons, and travel at the speed of a dodge ball. At present he can have 30 daggers in existence at any time. The Dark Energon Dagger can be used with acrobatic moves, allowing him a wide range of tactics. 

This doesn't need master acrobat. They're just daggers. But, you're good.

Chained to Hell Itself (300 OM,  requires Debuffing Proficiency): Akira can summon a length of jet-black chain that appears wrapped around his arm and extends up to 20 feet away. The chain is aimed as a projectile and moves about as fast as if Akira had thrown it, albeit in an unnaturally straight line. The chain wraps itself around the first object it hits, restraining it without damaging it or attaching Akira to an inanimate object.

The chain is summoned from Akira's Persona, Arsene, and is thus less a chain than the concept of a chain given form. Breaking it is a matter of recognizing it and deciding to break it, not brute strength: it is sturdiest against accidental strikes and environmental effects, as they lack intent, with the amount of time it takes a deliberate escape attempt to succeed varying by the power of the move used and the difference between Akira's and their TEC.

Maintaining a chain around an inanimate object or willing target (a balcony railing or a willing ally about to fall into a pit, for example) is easy, requiring almost no effort and only restricting Akira to within 20 feet of the target. Restraining an unwilling target adds several restrictions: the increased cost in energy and focus limits Akira to a slow walk and prevents him from using any ability requiring concentration, such as any Magic, summoning a Persona, or reloading his model gun, but does not prevent him from using weapons like said gun or his knife.

Seems alright, but remember you'll need Ranged Prof too (with you didn't list). "with the amount of time it takes a deliberate escape attempt to succeed varying by the power of the move used and the difference between Akira's and their TEC" is also a bit too vague. Give an example for how long you expect it to take. Also, it's a bit unclear whether you plan for this to just wrap around someone's arm or leg or if it'll be wrapping around their body and restraining them even more.

C - Carver (600 OM, Physical Strength, Debuff.): 
This sword weighs 2.4 pounds. The length of the blade is 75 centimeters. The total length of the blade is 90 Centimeters. The sword possesses a debuff that takes about 5 seconds to charge up [does he have to concentrate to charge up the debuff? are there any restrictions placed on him?], and lasts for 4 seconds. The debuff simply causes people to be afraid of the sword [that will require telepathy, also, how afraid?], the more the debuff is used, the weaker the effect is on the individuals around him. In addition, however, the debuff has another weakness. It is useless on anyone with a stronger TEC or DEF [remove the DEF part]than Warren Zimmer personally has. The sword was purchased from a merchant in the Endless Dunes by Warren Zimmer, along with other weapons for his own personal use. This can be used with other moves, and while moving. Does not require much concentration on his part to use.  [you only need concentration info for the debuff part]

Chained Chaos (300 OM, Physical Strength) 

A katana that was also purchased. This sword appears to be a generic katana, at first glance [how big is it?]. However, chains are wrapped around the hilt  and it is kept in it's sheath. This is used as a blunt weapon by Warren, most of the time. It is moderately draining on his stamina to summon [is it summoned instantly? or does it take time to summon?]. It requires no concentration on his part to use. It can be used with other moves, or while moving.

Unchained Chaos: (900 OM,  Physical Strength, Debuff.)


Unchained Chaos is the form of Chained Chaos where the limiters Warren put into the sword are released. It appears to be a generic katana, but has three modes he can use with it. 

• Saber Mode: The mode where Unchained Chaos behaves as a regular katana [how big is it?]. This can clash with most blades. It requires little to no concentration for Warren Zimmer to use. The sword is mildly draining on his stamina to use. Takes him about 3 seconds to activate this mode of the sword.  
  
• Lightning Mode: The mode where Unchained Chaos behaves like a sword that is charged with a Tazer. Dependent on the Tec of Warren versus the Tec of an opponent, Lightning Mode could cause loss of access to a limb temporarily, if it strikes an opponent. This loss would last about 5 seconds. Takes him 8 seconds to swap to this mode of the sword [how long can he keep the sword in this mode? because even with a charge time, this reads like you're getting unlimited paralysis attacks]. This is fairly draining on his stamina, and cannot be used with other blade style moves. 
  
• Fire Mode: This mode of the sword has it ignite with purple flames. The sword's debuff takes about 5 seconds to charge up [does he have to concentrate to charge up the debuff?]. Swapping to this mode of the sword takes about eight seconds. The burning would leave a burn mark on an opponent for the next 8 seconds that would hurt quite severely - making concentrating on sword moves difficult for an opponent. However,  this has a 10 second cool down, and cannot be stacked. 
  

Tier 1 Super Move  "Die"  - 600 OM,  Ranged Proficiency, Homing, Remote Control, Ranged Materialize, Telekineis. 

An orb of power that Warren can create roughly 15 feet away from his body, typically he has it hover over one hand. The orb then is sent at an opponent after he spends 10 seconds creating it. Once the orb reaches an opponent, it detonates with enough power that only a Tier One Super Move, or a Tier Two [No. Tier 1 or higher super defenses will block your T1 Attack] or Higher Super move could block it.

Warren, when you're writing a standard weapon, you don't need to say how much concentration it requires to use the weapon. That's implied. You only need to include that information for special stuff that can't be done irl. Like charging an attack.