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dustXxXharlan4lyfe:
this is a great addition to our collection of stories!!1! and omigosh if i am wright this is going to be part one of many to come!1!! <3

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The streets were choked with people. I was just trying to make my way through Courscant to take advantage of a sale that was going on at my favorite market. The world, however, was against this decision I had made. I liked to think I was a sensible person going out so late, but even as the burning sun burned at the sky to make it all kinds of pinks and purples I was recondisdering my choice. If I actually could make it to the market before it closed, I think I would have so little time to shop that there would be no point to it.

And yet, I still went.

Like something was drawing me closer. I wanted to go out.

That was so strang though. If anyone knew me at all they'd know that I hate going out. Especially in crowd infested streets and large groups of anyone. Friend or not. I hated people. All of them are absolutely pointless. My dream is to get out of this stupid city and go off somewhere less constricting.

Yet. I still amd drawn in.

I feel the people around me shoving and pulling and crushing my chest between two or more people. I try to resist groaning, but I can't help glare at the people around me. It's sufforcating. It's pointless. "Excuse me." I said, for the hundred millionth time as I slid further into the waves of people that I detested.

Not one person in that crowd was worth my time or concern.

That's when they shoved back and I felt my face land against someone's mid-back. Amazingly enough. I didn't think I was all that short, but to be face to mid back, maybe even lower, I was confused. It tried not to look so mad as I was at the other people and spoke a bit louder than I inteded to. "Sorry."

I hadn't been all that interested in strangers in the crowd, but when the large imposing figure turned around and I got an eye full of his gorgeous face my heart stopped. His long longs brushed away with the wind I hardly registered existed until I watched the sun's dying rays bounce off his moving strands. His bright red eyes burned me as I stared into them. I feel like I saw the concern flutter in the rubies I looked into, but I couldn't hear anything he was saying.

Instead I heard my heart thundering in my chest and knocking my knees off blance. I almost fainted, but without hesitation the tall man wraped his strong arms around me and held my weight. What little there was mind you! I didn't weigh much more than 100 pounds. I was a feather in his arms. A small doll he could crush at any point. And I was okay with that...

"Are you okay?" Dust said, a confident smile sliding across his chisled features.

My stomach fluttered away. "H-Hi."




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XXxdoggystylesuckerxXX: Great job @dustmaster; I really feel like you captured the scene and brought us with you through the journey we are abbut ot be blessed with. I am excited.
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dustmaster: Thank you, I really was trying super hard. I just couldnt' continue without putting a break in there. Stay tuned guys, your really going to enjoy this I promise.
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dustXxXharlan4lyfe: can you saay, heart-trobe!?!? OMG.
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HawtDogeDaym: finally someone who can write all the steamy deatils. wew lawd!
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harlanhunkaki: OMG you are SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO good. please moar!1!!
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dustmaster: Aw, How sweet. TY girls so much!!
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jayumhawtvamp: i did not think i would actually find good fanfic here. color me surprised. i'll be watching you, ma'am.
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dustmaster: Too Nice~!!!
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xXmeandstardustXx: I think you captured Dust almost perfectly too. He would SO help you out before you feel. That's why we love him~!
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icequeen: i mean.... i guess. could be better. i guess.
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dustmaster: ..Rude...
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icequeen: i just tell it how it is, sorry. not sorry.
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XXxdoggystylesuckerxXX: Friendly reminder here. Judgement Free Zone. Please.
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"Centurion: I'll leave you to your work then Dust. Thanks for chatting!
Me: no problem. stay awesome!
Centurion: It's more of a passive ability"



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