Move Creation Workshop

[Dane Regan]

Dark Energon Burst Cutter (300,  Ranged): 

Dark Energon Burst Cutter is an attack that takes Unicron about six seconds to power up during which time he cannot move at all. This can also be used by Rafael should he choose to do so. This creates three orbs of Dark Energon, each about the size of a Tennis Ball that he can use to attack his opponents. They also have [How many? 2? 3? 4? More?] spinning blades on the sides of them, that are about 10 inches each  that can be used to damage an opponent. This has a 15 second cool down. In addition, the orbs are fragile. A single hit with any amount of power put behind it could shatter the orbs, and until all three are shattered, none can be remade, meaning the move could not be reused. Of course, the move also has another caveat, it’s got a range of 70 feet from Unicron when the move is used. It is also moderately taxing on his stamina to use. These can be materialized about 20 feet from him [This needs ranged materialise], and their paths can be controlled by Rafael, or Unicron [This needs ranged control]. This requires a small amount of his focus, but he can charge, and use other moves while using Dark Energon Burst Cutter [Even if that other move needs all of his concentration?]. This travels at the speed of an arrow for Rafael, and also for Unicron at present. 

The Narwhal Song V1 (Telepathy, Debuff, Ranged Proficiency, Homing 600 OM.) 

The Narwhal Song is something that Rafael remembered from his world, and considered annoying. When you combine that with Unicron's power of telepathy, and his annoyance at being in the Omniverse at general, it's become a new attack of theirs. It takes roughly 8 seconds [Why did you increase this time?] during which he cannot attack, but is free to dodge, and perform other [simple] actions. As long as his Tec, and that of Unicron is superior to that of an oppoment he can flood the world of his opponent with nothing but narwhals, driving them up the wall, and making them beg for it to stop [I don't see how the existence of Narwhals would "drive someone up the wall", you missed out the song part]. It is to the point where it would make them barely even able to perform basic moves, or dodges [How long does this debuff last?]. The move does not require that Rafael aim anything, simply that he look in the direction of his opponent, which is what triggers the move.  There is more to the attack than that, though. For you see, Unicron does not just loathe being in the Omniverse, he's quite angry. This is reflected by the Narwhals attacking the individuals [To clarify, the person pictures the narwhals attacking them, and can take damage for it? Or does Raf control them? If Raf controls them, does he have to concentrate at all?]. However, this is a telepathic assault, with a unique caveat. If the opponent flinches, they receive the damage they would if, if it had been an actual attack [and roughly how much damage is this? per hit?]. However if someone is aware that the Narwhals are just an illusion, or a Hologram, or what have you, they will take no damage [So what happens if the debuffed person attacks a Narwhal? Does it disappear? Does nothing happen?]. The move takes him about 10 seconds to recharge, before he can use it once he has used it for the first time. 

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