Move Creation Workshop

[Dane Regan]

The Narwhal Song V1 (Telepathy, Debuff, Ranged Proficiency 600 OM.)

The Narwhal Song is something that Rafael remembered from his world, and considered annoying. When you combine that with Unicron's power of telepathy, and his annoyance at being in the Omniverse at general, it's become a new attack of theirs. It takes roughly 4 seconds [Does he have to stand still and focus on them? Can he dodge about and do other things at the same time?], but as long as their TEC is superior to that of their opponent, what Rafael can do is FLOOD the world of an opponent with nothing but Narwhals singing that song, and driving the opponent up the wall, to the point where they'd be unable to focus on anything else for about 15 seconds, and be begging for it to stop [So, does this just prevent someone concentrating on moves? Or can they barely do basic attacks and dodges?]. [Does he aim something? Or does it just 'happen'. If he doesn't need to aim anything, this needs homing.] There is more to the attack than that, though. For you see, Unicron does not just loathe being in the Omniverse, he's quite angry. This is reflected by the Narwhals attacking the individuals. However, this is a telepathic assault, with a unique caveat. If the opponent flinches, they receive the damage they would if, if it had been an actual attack [So basically, anyone who knows it's an illusion won't take damage?]. The Narwhal song takes about 20 seconds for it to recharge after the initial use. It cannot at present affect multiple opponents, just a single one. If facing a group of enemies, this would be used on the most powerful one of them. The damage this move does is pitifully weak, if an opponent flinches. [Is this move tiring?]

Dark Energon Burst Cutter (300,  Ranged,  Debuff [Why does this need debuff?],  Area Attack [Why does this need area attack? The orbs are tennis ball size and I don't see an explosion.], Ranged Materialize, Remote Control Proficiency.):

Dark Energon Burst Cutter is an attack that takes Unicron about six seconds to power up [can he move at the same time? does this require his full concentration, or can he do other stuff too?], and can also be used by Rafael should he choose to do so. This creates three orbs of Dark Energon, each about the size of a Tennis Ball that he can use to attack his opponents. The three orbs will spin around, before moving at the speeds of a bullet towards an opponent, making dodging them harder. They also have spinning blades [how big are the blades? how fast do they spin? are they on the sides of the orbs, or on the top (like a propeller)?] on them that can be used to damage an opponent. This has a 15 second cool down. In addition, the orbs are fragile. A single hit with any amount of power put behind it could shatter the orbs, and until all three are shattered, none can be remade, meaning the move could not be reused. Of course,  the move also has another caveat, it’s got a range of 70 feet from Unicron when the move is used. It is also moderately taxing on his stamina to use. These can be materialized about 20 feet from him, and their paths can be controlled by Rafael, or Unicron [How much concentration does this require? Also, they move a bullet speed, that's too fast for you to even see, yet alone control - outside of assigning a rough direction at the start].

I've added in some general comments here, most can probably be answered just by adding in a couple of words. Anyway, even if you edit in answers to your move, or don't know how to, just reply with your intentions.