04-03-2018, 02:45 PM
(This post was last modified: 04-03-2018, 02:46 PM by Dane Regan.)
(04-03-2018, 02:34 PM)Warren Zimmer Wrote: Anticorian Cuff (???)
The first feature of the Anticorian Cuff is that it locks all of Warren's moves that depended on his NFL-R so he cannot access them. The Anticorian Cuff acts as a Mobile Dataverse Device, and a Communicator for Warren Zimmer to personally use. The second feature of the Anticorian Cuff is it can cover his arm in a bronze metal gauntlet that reaches up to the elbow, and it can shoot a beam of bronze colored energy out of it. Charging up said beam takes 5 seconds, and the power level of the beam is rather low. The beam travels at the speed of an arrow, but once fired can be re-aimed by Warren Zimmer should the need arise for him to do so.
What do you think of my work on the Anticorian Cuff?
Will it be useful for you? No. You've already got your NFL-R to shoot lasers - I would just upgrade that move to have a more useful range and charge time instead. So this seems unnecessary. Also, low power for a 5 second charge? You can buff that.
Also, please list the proficiencies you think this will need.
As far as I can see, for cost, it would be:
300 - Lasers
and another 300 for the gauntlet if it is anything more than a cosmetic effect (which should be described more, like, does it protect his arm more than his usual DEF allows, can he use it to punch people harder, etc. any benefits it gives will need drawbacks).