03-27-2018, 04:40 PM
(03-26-2018, 09:19 PM)Summer Wrote: Body of Weather (Advanced Regeneration) (300):
[spoiler]Summer or Sonny begin to pull from the very same power that makes up their body, that found in the very weather all around them, greatly overdriving their natural regenerative ability. For as long as he's able to maintain this constant draw from nature itself, all wounds he would accrue are healed instantly, letting him keep fighting at peak performance even as injuries should begin to pile up. Since this is basically second nature to him, he can use it as easily as he can breathe, allowing him to fight, take hits, charge moves and powers, etc. Basically, he can start it, stop it, and maintain it whenever wants to, and fight unhindered as he does.
Such resilience is fleeting, however, and he cannot borrow power without paying it back. As wounds would accumulate, the energy it takes to maintain this ability grows rapidly, and the moment he's unable to maintain it anymore (either through wearing out or choosing to stop), the natural order reclaims its power. The weather itself (whether it's mist, light, snow, rain, wind, etc.) explodes out from his body and all the wounds that he suppressed through this regeneration reappear on him simultaneously. While he can hold back small wounds for minutes at a time before wearing out completely, the larger the wounds get, the more rapidly it tires him. Huge injuries like broken bones, deep slashes, and missing limbs can only be maintained for mere seconds before exhausting him, so even though he can fight less cautiously, he must still be wary, lest he tire himself out too quickly.[/spoiler]
And adjusting Heavenly Bolt as well because uh...
It was kinda stupidly unuseable >.>
I mean, it's still silly now, but less so. Also clarified a good few things that were too vague.
Old:
[spoiler]Heavenly Bolt (Ranged, Ranged Materialize, Area Attack) (300):
Channeling the weather’s power, Summer quickly and forcefully gathers up huge amounts of electrical energy in the sky. After four seconds of immobile charging, he calls down a single, powerful lightning strike from the heavens, regardless of whether it’s cloudy or clear, with a snap of his fingers for added flair. Aimed at a foe within fifty meters of him, the bolt slams into the ground, striking a random spot somewhere within twenty meters of the target. As a semi-natural lightning strike, the bolt itself holds tremendous amounts of power, wielding a strength capable of blowing apart grown trees from the inside. Of course, since it’s a bonafide lightning bolt, the actual bolt is approximately an inch wide and all but impossible to reliably aim. Actually getting it to hit what he wants it to hit comes down to pure chance. Due to this, he prefers to rely on the resulting shockwave, a powerful, concussive blast that bowls over anyone within three meters of the bolt itself. Calling down a lightning strike in such a short amount of time takes up a huge amount of Summer’s power, leaving him utterly exhausted in the wake of it. Can not be used in places where the skies are blocked, such as buildings or caves.[/spoiler]
And New:
[spoiler]Heavenly Bolt (Ranged, Ranged Materialize, Area Attack, Debuff) (300):
The wrath of the heavens themselves given physical form. Over the course of 5 seconds (a time during which he must remain totally still and cannot attack or be attacked), Summer forces a charge into the sky above, readying a devastating lightning bolt. With a snap of his fingers for added flair, he calls down a single, powerful strike, aiming for a target location of his choice within 50 meters. Since it's a totally natural lightning event, it, of course, carries all the tremendous power that lightning normally carries. This one-inch thick bolt of pure electricity tears down erratically from the heavens themselves, piercing through everyone and everything in its path, destroying every object and obstacle that it rips through. Of course, Prime-created shields that are equal to or stronger than this terrifying bolt will stop it in its path, but anything less merely weakens it on its inexorable journey to the ground.
Since it is a bonafide lightning strike, it’s impossible to reliably aim. While the bolt itself houses catastrophic strength, it will almost never hit what Summer intends it to, instead slamming down somewhere randomly within 10 meters of his target. (In the context of RP, this means it will never hit someone directly unless they're too big to miss). Due to this, he relies on its secondary effects instead. Anyone that the bolt itself passes within 6 meters of (whether that was when it touched down or if it passed by someone flying) is struck by a thunderous, concussive shockwave, throwing them clear off their feet and dazing them for 5 seconds. Anyone (including himself) within 20 meters is blinded by the flash and deafened by the blast, both also lasting 5 seconds.
Gathering up a charge in the sky as quickly as he does, regardless of the weather, is a lot more energy-intensive than simply gathering up charge within his body, especially for a strike as powerful as this is, leaving Summer completely and utterly exhausted after use, on the verge of collapsing then and there. Additionally, since it comes down from the sky, it can only be used in places where his view of the sky isn't blocked.[/spoiler]
Body of Weather is approved.
Your upgrades to Heavenly Bolt are approved. (On the basis that it can't conventionally do damage to anyone with its 100% miss rate, so it's basically just a strong debuff that's very deliberating for Summer to use)
@Sasuke: Can you explain how you trick someone into attacking an ally. "With illusions" is too vague. Does it make an ally look like Sasuke to them? Or something else? At the moment your moves lack the description. Also, I don't understand why the non-super version needs 300 OM. Lastly, can you elaborate on "Activation time and success is based on the rules regarding technique stat difference between the user and the target." Since, is it referring to the telepathy time/TEC constraints? The insight ones? Something else? For simplicity, just work the numbers you want into the move (like, takes X seconds, and varies in Y way based on TEC). Lastly, you'll need ranged proficiency listed, and maybe homing or ranged materialise depending on how you write the illusions and how they work.
As for whether or not your move is actually possible, I don't know. A higher up will give you the final approval since I can't think of anything similar off the top of my head. I'd assume it is doable with the right drawbacks.