Move Creation Workshop

[Gilgamesh]

I'm having some trouble with a moves format and the balancing... I was told this is where I was supposed to go for help in that department.

Death’s Gaze (300 OM) debuff proficiency

‘Born from blood, to blood will they return’
When a desire to kill comes over Taloc, his eyes change, causing the iris to extend out across the entirety of his eye with crimson streaks swirling and pulsating where the whites were previously. His killing intent and thirst for blood becomes palpable and overpowering, enveloping the target caught in his gaze and giving them reason to pause.
A single target move, Death’s Gaze causes an opponent to hesitate while fighting Taloc by drowning them in his desire to kill, it is triggered by emotion and is otherwise involuntary. The target is only affected so long as his gaze is upon them, and the effect ends immediately once he loses sight of them. Stamina drain is negligible.

Any help would be greatly appreciated.

This is gonna need Telepathy cause your inserting emotions into an opponents minds. How does this trigger does this just happen when you want it or does it require eye contact or a charge time? What does it feel like for the opponent? As a clarification are they hesistating because they're frightened of Taloc's murderous intent or is there something I'm missing? As for strength of the move, making an opponent hesistant to fight you for an unlimited amount of time seems a little strong. Maybe clarify onto how long it can last or any general drawbacks Taloc has to do. Why couldn't you just permanently do this if there was no drawbacks.