Move Approval V

[Takanomiya Hijiri]

I'd like to get this approved:

Original Form [Tier Two Powered-Up Form] (1500)
Stats: 4/4/9/3
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(See his Tier One Power-Up for more images of the clothing)[/spoiler]
In a bright flash of white light, which lasts half a second, Hijiri enters his Heavenly Form; replacing his shirt and jacket with a long black coat with slits over the shoulders, his shoes with a pair of white boots, and giving him a pair of fingerless gloves. His trousers become slightly looser and less formal, but don't change all that much. Also, a faintly glowing purple gem forms on his chest, a pair of small, dark grey wings appear on his head, and he also grows a rabbit-like tail... though this last part is covered by his clothes.

And I'd like to make some small edits to a few existing moves and my T1 Power-Up:

Previous:

Battle Rabbit Form [Tier 1 Power-Up] (1000)
Stats: +2 /+2 /+1 /+0
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In a bright flash of white light, Hijiri enters his 'true' form; replacing his shirt and jacket with a long black coat with slits over the shoulders, his shoes with a pair of white boots, and giving him a pair of fingerless gloves. His trousers become slightly looser and less formal, but don't change all that much. Also, a faintly glowing purple gem forms on his chest, a pair of white rabbit ears appear on his head, and he also grows a rabbit-like tail... though this last part is covered by his clothes.

Updated:

True Form [Tier One Powered-Up Form] (1000)
Stats: 4/4/4/3
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In a bright flash of white light, which lasts half a second, Hijiri enters his Battle Rabbit Form; replacing his shirt and jacket with a long black coat with slits over the shoulders, his shoes with a pair of white boots, and giving him a pair of fingerless gloves. His trousers become slightly looser and less formal, but don't change all that much. Also, a faintly glowing purple gem forms on his chest, a pair of white rabbit ears appear on his head, and he also grows a rabbit-like tail... though this last part is covered by his clothes.

I'm changing the name to better match that of his Tier Two Power-Up, and hoping to be able to change it to a Powered-Up Form for the same reason (the total value for each stat doesn't change). Also, adding a clarification on how long the flash of light lasts, since I missed that when first getting it approved.



Previous:

Rabbit Coat of Identity Concealment (0)
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- Left Art by Werewolf9595, Right Art from the Manga -

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Hijiri's current outfit is a disguise which includes bandages on his face and a long coat with bunny ears. Unlike his normal clothes, these two items were designed specifically to not be switched out when he uses a Power-Up, meaning that his disguise will not be ruined by doing so.

Updated:

Rabbit Coat of Identity Concealment (0)
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- Left Art by Werewolf9595, Right Art from the Manga -

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A disguise which includes bandages on his face and a long coat with bunny ears. Unlike his normal clothes, these two items were designed specifically to not be switched out when he uses a Power-Up, meaning that if he does so whilst wearing these, his disguise will not be ruined.

This is no longer Hijiri's current outfit... but I figure I may as well keep it since it already got approved: this one is just a minor change in wording.



Previous:

Hijiri's Katana (300)
(Physical Strength)
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It's just an ordinary katana. Fairly light compared to other types of swords, with a slightly curved blade, only one side of which has an edge. The pommel & guard are gold-coloured and the grip is dark purple & red. The hilt is long enough that it can be gripped with both hands if necessary. Also, it comes with a dark purple scabbard. The katana's total length is 96cm; the blade is 72cm & the hilt 24cm.

Updated:

Heavenly Weapon: Katana (300)
(Physical Strength)
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Like all katana, Hijiri's is fairly light compared to other types of sword and its blade has only one edge. The pommel & guard are gold and the grip is dark purple & red. The katana's total length is 96cm; the blade is 72cm & the hilt 24cm. Also, it comes with a dark purple scabbard.

Rather than carrying it around with him everywhere he goes, Hijiri can summon and un-summon his blade at will. It appears/disappears in a bright flash of white light, which lasts half a second. Having the sword appear does not tire him at all, or require any concentration. When summoned, the sword always arrives sheathed within its scabbard.

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Desert Eagle Mark XIX (300)
(Ranged Proficiency)
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This Mark XIX .50 AE Desert Eagle is a gas-operated semi-automatic pistol with a 6" barrel (total length: 10.75"), a gold finish and a clip size of 7 rounds. This gun is much more powerful than most firearms would be in the hands of someone with Hijiri's ATK, however in addition to requiring a couple seconds to reload between clips, it also has a very powerful recoil, so firing frequently will quickly tire him and will even start to strain his muscles after the first few shots. Also, the recoil will throw off his aim whenever it is fired, making it more difficult to land further shots for each consecutive shot fired without pause.

Updated:

Heavenly Weapon: Desert Eagle (300)
(Ranged Proficiency)
[Spoiler][/spoiler]
This Mark XIX .50 AE Desert Eagle is a gas-operated semi-automatic pistol with a 6" barrel (total length: 10.75"), a gold finish and a clip size of 7 rounds. This gun is much more powerful than most firearms would be in the hands of someone with Hijiri's ATK, however in addition to requiring a couple seconds to reload between clips, it also has a very powerful recoil, so firing frequently will quickly tire him and will even start to strain his muscles after the first few shots. Also, the recoil will throw off his aim whenever it is fired, making it more difficult to land further shots for each consecutive shot fired without pause.

Rather than carrying it around with him everywhere he goes, Hijiri can summon and un-summon his handgun at will. It appears/disappears in a bright flash of white light, which lasts half a second. Having the pistol appear does not tire him at all, or require any concentration.

The changes to the sword and gun don't really make the moves any more powerful, since they aren't actually any faster to pull out, the reasons I'm making these two edits are just because:
a) It looks cooler to have stuff appear out of thin air.
b) I'm kinda dumb and keep forgetting to say that he has his stuff with him when I'm writing... I don't wanna pick a fight with someone only to suddenly realise that Hijiri left his weapons back home.  :wat:

As for the names of those moves, I changed them to better fit the manga (they use the term 'Heavenly Weapon' occasionally).