Move Creation Workshop

[Gilgamesh]

Fire.EXE  V1 (Ranged Proficiency, Area Attack, Debuff. 300 OM): 

Fire.EXE is a command that Rafael can choose to activate. This takes him about 2 seconds to activate, during which time he cannot do anything, attack, or defend, or move at all. However, once this is charged up he may move, and attack, and defend as usual. This attack possesses two forms that he can choose to use on an opponent. 

Single Shot - Single Shot is the first form of Fire.EXE. This creates a Fireball that shoots out of his Tablet which materializes it out of Code and then sends it at an opponent. Travels at the speed of an arrow, moderately draining on his stamina. Cannot be used with other moves but he can move, and defend himself as needed. The fireball is the size of a basketball. 

Barrier.EXE V1: (Ranged Proficiency, Area Shield, Area Attack, Homing, ??? OM)

The barrier is yet another program that Rafael can run on his tablet. Based off of a Firewall, this creates a dome of fire that can protect both him, and one other person. What is unique is that this takes him about 5 seconds to charge up, but then comes with a special property of sorts that Rafael can choose to use, or Unicron can. Upon a successful impact against the shield, the shield will retaliate with a purple bolt of fire the size of a human fist at an opponent. The shield can tank up to one attack, and retaliate a single time before it breaks. If it is not impacted at all the shield can last about ten seconds at maximum. While Rafael cannot leave the dome, or move from inside of it, he can attack from inside of it with any ranged attacks that he possesses, but when in use, he cannot use melee attacks. Moderately draining on his strength. 

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Steel grenade: A Deceptive looking ball  that looks almost like a toy, is packed with phosphorus and c4 plastic explosive. Is armed with an proximity detonator that is able to detect Biometric signatures. This prevents Warren from setting the device off on his own. When activated the device explodes violently causing a great deal of damage to anyone around it. Warren keeps two of these on him and can focus for 5 seconds to create more, however doing this uses a great deal of stamina.

For your Fire.EXE you say it can take two forms to attack but I only see one. Additionally for when you say the fireball materializes you say it comes out of code? What does this mean? Also i'm a little confused. You say during the charge time he cannot attack which is fine. But then after the charge you say he attacks as usual but then say he can't use this move with other moves? What does this mean?

Barrier.EXE you say it can protect one other person but it would be much better to say how wide the wall is itself. One other person is extremely flexible and vague. Also is the total charge time for this move 5 seconds or once the barrier is up you can do an additional 5 seconds for the retaliations. Also I would say if you can 'choose' to retaliate with the bolt of flame it would be 600 OM.

'While Rafael cannot leave the dome, or move from inside of it, he can attack from inside of it with any ranged attacks that he possesses, but when in use, he cannot use melee attacks. Moderately draining on his strength. '

This bit is kinda confusing and can be worded better. "This dome requires a lot of Rafaels concentration so he cannot move or make any physical attacks while in the dome. He, however, can make any ranged attacks during this duration." ---> This isn't perfect but I think it's a bit more clear.

Lastly for this move, can other people inside the barrier attack or move or does it only affect you. (Also this is just for me and probably won't be asked but is this mostly for projectiles. What if someone were to run at you with a sword. Would the wall of fire stop them?)

Steel Grenade-Okay so whats the radius of the explosion and can you make the proximity detonator a little clearer. I think it means when someone walks near it but I'm not 100% sure. Also a 'great deal of damage' for two things you always carry on you seems to be a bit much. Also is there a limit you can have out at once?