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Move Creation Workshop
(03-06-2018, 05:56 PM)Rafael Esquivel Wrote: [spoiler]Where am I? (Telepathy, Ranged, Debuff, 300 OM)

Charging it for seven seconds, Unicron will release a shockwave of mental power. This will do no damage to an opponent at first, but that is where the next part of the move comes in. Thirty identical copies of Unicron/Raf will have appeared around the opponent in a circle. The thing is, if they hit the right copy they don't take any damage. Hit a wrong one, and they receive a tiny amount of damage that would barely even be noticeable by them. However, the damage stacks up, and the copies regenerate if the original is not hit. Each copy takes about 5 seconds for them to regenerate. Telepathy and Enhanced Senses can get around this move entirely. Each copy can be maintained by Unicron/Raf for about 5 seconds, so he has the combined time of the number of copies to keep them all around. If he were forced to keep this going for a long time it would probably be taxing enough to make him pass out. These are Hallucinations, but contain a unstable orb of crystal that is what causes the damage when it is struck.

Clarent - Sword of the Traitor (300, Physical Strength, Debuff, Buff): 

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The sword of Mordred that was found in the ruins where Unicron and Rafael have been staying. Enhanced with Omnilium this is able to clash with other blades. The sword of Mordred is a powerful blade that can clash with most weapons. In addition, due to being infected with Dark Energon, the blade is naturally glowing purple although that is more for cosmetic effects. The Buff of the Sword allows him to "Knight" people that he touches on the shoulder with this sword, temporarily resetting all the cool downs of their moves, so that they can use them once more. The Debuff is that he could alternately once every 45 seconds slash them, and make it as if they had used all their moves, and so would need to cool them down. [/spoiler]

I have a suggested rewrite for "Where am I?" since it's a bit unspecific right now. Change anything I might have gotten wrong. Also, it would need homing unless he's actually aiming something at them to hit. But even then, for them to automatically take damage after killing a fake, that needs homing.

Quote:Where am I? (Telepathy, Ranged, Debuff, Homing, 300 OM)

After concentrating on an opponent for seven seconds, during which Unicron/Raf can move but not attack and their opponent has to stay within range of their telepathy, Unicron releases an invisible shockwave of mental power towards his target. This does no damage initially, but after that hits them, they will see 30 copies of Unicron/Raf standing around them in a circle (with a radius of roughly 5m). One of them will be the real Unicron/Raf, the others are all illusions that only they can see. Furthermore, for the duration of this move, they forget where the real Unicron/Raf was before it was used, so will be clueless about his location among the duplicates. Both the real and fake Unicron/Raf's stand still, and if one talks all the others do as well. Only the person hit by the shockwave can see the illusions.

While inside the circle, they are compelled to stay there, and instinctively know the best way to leave is to hit Unicron/Raf. However, when they hit a fake, they take a small amount of damage, akin to a shock - this damage will add up. If they hit Unicron/Raf, the fakes all disappear and this move ends. If a clone is destroyed, it reappears 5 seconds later and they forget that they already destroyed it before. This move takes a moderate amount of energy to maintain, and requires all of Unicron/Raf's concentration to keep it active. This move lasts for 30 seconds. Enhanced senses can be used to instantly figure out the real Unicron/Raf, and Telepathy and a high TEC can be used to make an educated guess.

As for your sword, are you sure you want another sword? You could add these effects to your old one by upgrading it instead. Besides that:
>This will cost 900 OM (300 - Sword, 300 - Buff, 300 - Debuff)
>How long is the sword?
>This needs drawbacks.
>I'd advise splitting it into three paragraphs to make it clear (one per effect). Even if those paragraphs turn out small.


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