02-25-2018, 09:49 PM
Hi there! Excellent joining form, there's just a few things I'd like for you to clear up!
You only have 9 stat points listed here, but all primes start with 10! Add a single stat point to one of your listed stats, please.
- Can Leona move around or do other things while using/charging the move, or must she remain stationary?
- Is it difficult to aim the big projection sword-image thing? Must it be aimed at all?
- Just to be clear, this can be used like a normal sword to hack and slash at foes, right? How quick is this sword?
- How long does it take for this shield to be activated/put to use by Leona?
- You will need to include a drawback. From the Balancing Moves section, "Drawbacks of a move might be: its low power, its difficulty to hit with, the long time it takes to charge, the limited number of times it can be used, the fatigue or harm it inflicts on the user, or otherwise. 'Cooldowns' (not being able to use a move for a period of time) are considered a very mild downside and quite 'videogamey' so consider using other types of downsides that are more realistic and have more impact, allowing you to create stronger moves."
Quote:STATS:
ATK: 2
DEF: 4
SPD: 1
TEC: 2
You only have 9 stat points listed here, but all primes start with 10! Add a single stat point to one of your listed stats, please.
Quote:Zennieth Blade (600 OM, requires Physical strength, ranged, and debuff): A 5 foot red and gold sword imbued with the energy of the sun. Taking 2 seconds to cast, Leona projects a solar image of her sword, in a line of 20 feet, the image travels a bit slowly, taking 5 seconds to reach the full 20 feet, and deals to the first person struck, who will be briefly immobilized (2 seconds) giving Leona time to close the distance. She needs 5 seconds in order to do it again.
- Can Leona move around or do other things while using/charging the move, or must she remain stationary?
- Is it difficult to aim the big projection sword-image thing? Must it be aimed at all?
- Just to be clear, this can be used like a normal sword to hack and slash at foes, right? How quick is this sword?
Quote:Shield of Daybreak (600 OM, requires Area Defense, Physical Strength, and Debuff): a 3 foot wide, 5 feet tall shield, meant to block. Leona also uses her shield to perform a a bash that does 3 second stun to the target, with a little bit of damage, Leona takes 2 seconds to complete the bash and needs a 6 seconds before she can do it again.
- How long does it take for this shield to be activated/put to use by Leona?
- You will need to include a drawback. From the Balancing Moves section, "Drawbacks of a move might be: its low power, its difficulty to hit with, the long time it takes to charge, the limited number of times it can be used, the fatigue or harm it inflicts on the user, or otherwise. 'Cooldowns' (not being able to use a move for a period of time) are considered a very mild downside and quite 'videogamey' so consider using other types of downsides that are more realistic and have more impact, allowing you to create stronger moves."
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