02-04-2018, 06:20 PM
@Mega Man X:
Just pasting the currently approved versions of your moves here, for reference:
[spoiler]
Silver Stinger - 300 OM (Requires Ranged Proficiency, Debuff Proficiency)
A special weapon obtained from the data of Hornet Man.EXE. X can equip this weapon in a flash, shifting his color scheme into a white body with yellow-gold armor, and he cannot use any other special weapon until he reverts to normal. When used, the X-Buster fires a large silvery cone like a spearhead, traveling at the speed of an arrow up to 20 meters accurately before falling out of trajectory. The stinger injects an immobilizing venom into whatever it impacts with, stunning the damaged area for 10 seconds unless it is deflected or instantly removed. Striking a stunned area multiple times will not stack or replenish the duration. X can only fire one shot per second, and can only ever fire 20 stingers without recharging the weapon at a safe base. Firing this weapon too frequently can tire out X, and depleting the weapon will exhaust him similar to overuse of the X-Buster.
Rose Splash - 300 OM (Requires Ranged Proficiency)
A special weapon obtained from the data of Plant Man.EXE. X can equip this weapon in a flash, shifting his color scheme into a green body with pink armor, and he cannot use any other special weapon until he reverts to normal. When used, the X-Buster fires a shotgun blast of plant thorns, like deadly flechettes. The blast of thorns can only cover an area 10 meters out in a 1-meter-square area. Charged version fires a shotgun of seeds instead, which explode into a patch of lashing vines 1 second after they hit a surface. X can only fire one shot per 2 seconds, and can only ever fire 14 shots without recharging the weapon at a safe base. Firing this weapon too frequently can tire out X, and depleting the weapon will exhaust him similar to overuse of the X-Buster.[/spoiler]
Silver Stinger: Changes would be fine. But, as far as I can tell, you've made this move harder to use (lower range, less ammo, longer recharge) with no real benefit. The new wording is better, however. I know the original was approved without, but I think you should give a rough size of the stingers. Like, "two inches long" or something.
Rose Splash: This doesn't need debuff. It doesn't leave any lingering deliberating effects.
"This weapon can only be used 10 times before needing to be recharged."
A bit of a nitpick, but you didn't say anything about how recharging works for this move. I'd assume it's only out of battle like the other - but you didn't add that comment it. Also, you should give a rough speed of the Vine.
Just pasting the currently approved versions of your moves here, for reference:
[spoiler]
Silver Stinger - 300 OM (Requires Ranged Proficiency, Debuff Proficiency)
A special weapon obtained from the data of Hornet Man.EXE. X can equip this weapon in a flash, shifting his color scheme into a white body with yellow-gold armor, and he cannot use any other special weapon until he reverts to normal. When used, the X-Buster fires a large silvery cone like a spearhead, traveling at the speed of an arrow up to 20 meters accurately before falling out of trajectory. The stinger injects an immobilizing venom into whatever it impacts with, stunning the damaged area for 10 seconds unless it is deflected or instantly removed. Striking a stunned area multiple times will not stack or replenish the duration. X can only fire one shot per second, and can only ever fire 20 stingers without recharging the weapon at a safe base. Firing this weapon too frequently can tire out X, and depleting the weapon will exhaust him similar to overuse of the X-Buster.
Rose Splash - 300 OM (Requires Ranged Proficiency)
A special weapon obtained from the data of Plant Man.EXE. X can equip this weapon in a flash, shifting his color scheme into a green body with pink armor, and he cannot use any other special weapon until he reverts to normal. When used, the X-Buster fires a shotgun blast of plant thorns, like deadly flechettes. The blast of thorns can only cover an area 10 meters out in a 1-meter-square area. Charged version fires a shotgun of seeds instead, which explode into a patch of lashing vines 1 second after they hit a surface. X can only fire one shot per 2 seconds, and can only ever fire 14 shots without recharging the weapon at a safe base. Firing this weapon too frequently can tire out X, and depleting the weapon will exhaust him similar to overuse of the X-Buster.[/spoiler]
Silver Stinger: Changes would be fine. But, as far as I can tell, you've made this move harder to use (lower range, less ammo, longer recharge) with no real benefit. The new wording is better, however. I know the original was approved without, but I think you should give a rough size of the stingers. Like, "two inches long" or something.
Rose Splash: This doesn't need debuff. It doesn't leave any lingering deliberating effects.
"This weapon can only be used 10 times before needing to be recharged."
A bit of a nitpick, but you didn't say anything about how recharging works for this move. I'd assume it's only out of battle like the other - but you didn't add that comment it. Also, you should give a rough speed of the Vine.