Move Creation Workshop

[Takanomiya Hijiri]

@Warren -

Fumbled Play - (900 OM, Physical Strength, Debuff, Ranged Proficiency, Area Attack): 


Fumbled Play is a scythe that takes Warren about 12 seconds for him to create. This scythe is a weapon that can be used for melee purposes by slashing at his opponents. The scythe has a poison that makes a person weaker for 10 seconds when injected. The Scythe also has a ranged attack, namely releasing an arcing crescent shaped wave of energy at an opponent with each swing that deals moderate damage, like the melee of the scythe does. The Scythe's ranged attack has a range of 150 feet in any direction when it is swung. This cannot be re-aimed when it is used. In addition, swinging the scythe exhausts Warren, so he cannot use it in combat for prolonged periods of time. 


Baseball Bat (300 OM, Physical Prof, Debuff.): 

A purple, gray and black baseball bat. This is used by Warren to debuff an opponent by trying to smack them anywhere he can, though typically he goes for the head, to cause them a concussion. Each hit will cause them a 2 second concussion, and this can be stacked up to 5 times when it is used on an opponent. The bat dependent on Warren's DEF versus the Tec/Attack of an opponent can clash with such weapons as legendary swords, lightsabers, energy swords or really just any other melee weapon. The Baseball Bat is a simple weapon, but is one that Warren will not often use because of his favor for the sport of Football. 

These moves are... not worded as well as they could be. You've missed out some essential information and added in a fair bit of unnecessary information. Here's how I would recommend writing the scythe:

Fumbled Play - (900 OM, Physical Strength, Debuff, Ranged Proficiency, Area Attack): 


Fumbled Play is a very heavy scythe with a [number]-foot-long shaft and a [number]-foot-long blade, which takes Warren about 2 seconds to summon. The scythe can be used in melee, but also has a ranged attack, which takes the form of a [colour], crescent-shaped wave of energy of equal size to the blade, that will travel in a straight line towards his target when swung towards a target outside of the weapon's reach. This crescent wave deals the same amount of damage as a normal swing, has a maximum range of 150 feet, and travels as fast as a bullet. Using it has no additional energy drain beyond the amount of effort needed to swing the scythe. Being cut by the scythe (either in melee or at range) also saps the target's strength noticeably for 10 seconds.

I left most of the values empty for you to fill in, but reduced the summoning time by ten seconds, because 12 is just way too massive a flaw... if you really want it, though, feel free to put that extra digit back in.

The bat is just a bat.
All it needs is a length and weight, basically. Hitting someone on the head hard enough to concuss does not require a move, or Debuff proficiency.