01-31-2018, 05:15 PM
@Warren:
>This should still be 300, I didn't notice before when you changed the cost, but it only does one thing. Explode, then cause a gas cloud. There's no varient.
>Sorry if I didn't explain myself well before. But, for moves, you should avoid comparisons to "real" statistics when it comes to damaging potential. So, instead of saying "this is as strong as a landmine" say "this is really powerful" or "this is moderately strong". Furthermore, you don't need to include the whole "ATK vs DEF" comment isn't needed. So, replace:
"This has power dependent on his ATK versus the DEF stat of an opponent. Typically, Warren leaves the explosion lowered powered to about that of a fire cracker, but at maximum this has the explosive potential of a landmine."
with
"The explosion part of this move is [moderately/very] powerful."
Further side comment:
"As a fourth option, they could hit the Foot Bomb with such force that it would be destroyed instantly, as it were, preventing it from going off."
>This doesn't make sense, because you said it explodes if it hits something. I suggest you simply remove this part from the move.
>This should still be 300, I didn't notice before when you changed the cost, but it only does one thing. Explode, then cause a gas cloud. There's no varient.
>Sorry if I didn't explain myself well before. But, for moves, you should avoid comparisons to "real" statistics when it comes to damaging potential. So, instead of saying "this is as strong as a landmine" say "this is really powerful" or "this is moderately strong". Furthermore, you don't need to include the whole "ATK vs DEF" comment isn't needed. So, replace:
"This has power dependent on his ATK versus the DEF stat of an opponent. Typically, Warren leaves the explosion lowered powered to about that of a fire cracker, but at maximum this has the explosive potential of a landmine."
with
"The explosion part of this move is [moderately/very] powerful."
Further side comment:
"As a fourth option, they could hit the Foot Bomb with such force that it would be destroyed instantly, as it were, preventing it from going off."
>This doesn't make sense, because you said it explodes if it hits something. I suggest you simply remove this part from the move.