Hecate Rothchild

[Mark]

I would probably just do something basic like "she can deal a few hits and not be too drained, but dealing more than X number would drain her energy and leave her breathless". The exact numbers would depend on what you do with the severity of the wounds thing; I'd add in something like '5+ hits on a limb of the average foe' or something like that if you're describing it in terms of a really bad wound. On someone with lower DEF it would be fewer hits and someone with a higher DEF it would be more hits, so something vague like that works out well. As for the duration, 3 minutes is too long of a duration of the freezing effect (at least for the upper levels of freezing; 3 minutes of numbness is no big deal, but having your leg frozen solid for 3 minutes is way too powerful), unless you want to add in something about her needing to constantly concentrate on the effect to maintain it, or if you want to add in a way for your enemy to shake off the effect.

Since this move is rather complex, if you'd rather move this discussion to the Move Approval thread and I can just approve you without it for now so that you can start writing, I have no problem doing that. Otherwise we can keep hashing it out here if you want, either one works for me.