History looks good.
For your move, can you describe the stamina drain a bit better? Saying it lasts until she tires out is pretty vague. Also, how quickly does the slow effect ramp up? Is the freezing ability something that happens whenever she uses the swords or is it something she can choose to invoke or not use? If it's something that always happens you don't need to pay 600 for it.
EDIT: Also be sure when you're writing up a move to list which powers and proficiencies the move would require. In this instance that would be Physical Strength and Debuff Proficiency. Obviously not a huge deal now as you're brand new, but in the future.
For your move, can you describe the stamina drain a bit better? Saying it lasts until she tires out is pretty vague. Also, how quickly does the slow effect ramp up? Is the freezing ability something that happens whenever she uses the swords or is it something she can choose to invoke or not use? If it's something that always happens you don't need to pay 600 for it.
EDIT: Also be sure when you're writing up a move to list which powers and proficiencies the move would require. In this instance that would be Physical Strength and Debuff Proficiency. Obviously not a huge deal now as you're brand new, but in the future.
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