02-09-2015, 09:59 PM
Welcome to the Omniverse!
First thing's first, I can tell you have put a lot of time into this application, nice history if I might add. While we don't require a role-playing sample you went ahead and wrote one, which was also very nice.
Anyways on to the move-set!
First off when you approve moves you want to put proficiencies next to the name
So for Gravity Field your going to need ranged proficiency, debuff proficiency, and area attack proficiency, which you have. This move is insanely strong and this site is really, REALLY picky on debuffs just because it reduces player interaction and they can be overpowered.
I'm going to price this at 600 because you can do this to both single targets and over a widespread area. Also this move is going to get nerfed super hard since it basically stops the person from doing anything at all. In ten minutes you can do anything to a person which is an insane amount of time so your going to need to reduce the time down. This is also going to need some downsides even after those nerds so you're going to have to add a fatigue factor or anything else that you can think of that might balance it. Also you might need to be able to use it less because this is so strong you shouldn't be able to use it within such short periods of time.
Also some quick questions about the move itself- Can she move or attack while she uses this move and if she gets hit by something does it stop the field? I'm assuming yes but is this move instantaneous?
As for the Martial Arts that doesn't require a move. You can feel free to state that she is a Muay Thai Expert in your roster once we set you up but you don't need to purchase that with OM.
Lastly, for your character profile you need to use your official roster once you get approved, and only use the last part(the viewtopic…etc. and on)
First thing's first, I can tell you have put a lot of time into this application, nice history if I might add. While we don't require a role-playing sample you went ahead and wrote one, which was also very nice.
Anyways on to the move-set!
First off when you approve moves you want to put proficiencies next to the name
So for Gravity Field your going to need ranged proficiency, debuff proficiency, and area attack proficiency, which you have. This move is insanely strong and this site is really, REALLY picky on debuffs just because it reduces player interaction and they can be overpowered.
I'm going to price this at 600 because you can do this to both single targets and over a widespread area. Also this move is going to get nerfed super hard since it basically stops the person from doing anything at all. In ten minutes you can do anything to a person which is an insane amount of time so your going to need to reduce the time down. This is also going to need some downsides even after those nerds so you're going to have to add a fatigue factor or anything else that you can think of that might balance it. Also you might need to be able to use it less because this is so strong you shouldn't be able to use it within such short periods of time.
Also some quick questions about the move itself- Can she move or attack while she uses this move and if she gets hit by something does it stop the field? I'm assuming yes but is this move instantaneous?
As for the Martial Arts that doesn't require a move. You can feel free to state that she is a Muay Thai Expert in your roster once we set you up but you don't need to purchase that with OM.
Lastly, for your character profile you need to use your official roster once you get approved, and only use the last part(the viewtopic…etc. and on)
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