03-09-2018, 12:51 AM
Warren:
• What do the shots look like? e.g. are they proper laser beams, or short blasts of energy (à la Star Wars)? Also, what colour are they? I'd assume purple given the picture, but it's up to you.
• "or if Primes have only one move, all the moves that they possess" you don't need this bit, since all of the moves of a character with one move is still just one move. Also, you should note that in the case of weapon-type moves, what actually happens is that they lose their skill at wielding the weapon (meaning that it only deals Incidental damage for the ten second period)... since it doesn't really make sense for your gun to vaporise someone's weapon then inexplicably unvaporise it 10 seconds later...
Personally, I am of the opinion that you ought to be allowed this move with just the requirements you have listed, but based on what mods have said previously, I expect you will be forced to buy Telepathy in order to leave someone unable to use a certain move temporarily.
• 15 seconds is much too long. Also, you'll need to say that it is limited to only removing one move per target... it'd be kinda silly if you could just fire it at the same person constantly all fight.
• You don't need to state that the third mode is aimed for a weak point, that's the sort of thing you would mention during the fight itself.
• You also need to describe the appearance of the second and third shots, assuming they are different from the first.
• Types 2 & 3 need reload times.
Dabony (or someone else) may have more to add that I've missed.
• What do the shots look like? e.g. are they proper laser beams, or short blasts of energy (à la Star Wars)? Also, what colour are they? I'd assume purple given the picture, but it's up to you.
• "or if Primes have only one move, all the moves that they possess" you don't need this bit, since all of the moves of a character with one move is still just one move. Also, you should note that in the case of weapon-type moves, what actually happens is that they lose their skill at wielding the weapon (meaning that it only deals Incidental damage for the ten second period)... since it doesn't really make sense for your gun to vaporise someone's weapon then inexplicably unvaporise it 10 seconds later...
Personally, I am of the opinion that you ought to be allowed this move with just the requirements you have listed, but based on what mods have said previously, I expect you will be forced to buy Telepathy in order to leave someone unable to use a certain move temporarily.
• 15 seconds is much too long. Also, you'll need to say that it is limited to only removing one move per target... it'd be kinda silly if you could just fire it at the same person constantly all fight.
• You don't need to state that the third mode is aimed for a weak point, that's the sort of thing you would mention during the fight itself.
• You also need to describe the appearance of the second and third shots, assuming they are different from the first.
• Types 2 & 3 need reload times.
Dabony (or someone else) may have more to add that I've missed.
![[Image: Remote_Sensor_Tower_and_the_Fire_Warriors_2.png]](https://image.ibb.co/jSJjAJ/Remote_Sensor_Tower_and_the_Fire_Warriors_2.png)