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Move Creation Workshop
(02-15-2018, 09:53 PM)Hecate Rothchild Wrote: Freeze: (600) OM  Ranged Proficiancy/Debuf Proficiancy.
Shantotto channels her magical powers for 6 seconds creating a small 5 foot wide maelstrom at target location. After 2 seconds the maelstrom flash freezes dealing moderate damage.

This attack applies a debuff to target on hit that increases the damage dealt by fire based spells. This debuff lasts 10 seconds.

Shantotto is slightly strained using this spell. As it drains about 1/10th of her mana reserves.
Freeze has a 60 foot range.


(starting move for my second chara)

This will require Ranged Materialize Proficiency.

It does not need to be 600 OM.

You don't need to mention how much of your "mana reserves" the Move taxes, but I'd say 1/10 would be a bit more than slightly strained. A powerful punch would slightly strain someone, but they wouldn't collapse from exhaustion on the tenth punch. Just leave it at slightly strain. You don't need to measure exact numbers on when you'll run out of stamina or "mana". Just gotta mention a general idea of the strain.

We don't usually do the "fire hurts more, but ice doesn't" type dealie, so I'd just go with a "Applies a Debuff which slightly increases the damage of the next attack against the target" and leave it like that. 

If someone moves outside that 5 foot area before those 2 seconds are up, I assume your attack will miss. Can you direct it to follow an opponent? If so, you'll also need Remote Control Proficiency. As is, a step or two to the side (easily doable in 2 seconds) causes the attack to fail.
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