01-01-2018, 08:51 PM
(This post was last modified: 01-06-2018, 12:17 PM by Jade Harley.)
(01-01-2018, 07:12 PM)Kopaka Wrote:(12-28-2017, 08:48 AM)Kopaka Wrote: Giving a Helping Hand
Quest or Personal Storyline: Quest – Hand of the Empire
Participating Characters: Kopaka (Technically Casey Jones but he got switched.)
Total Character Count: 56,780
Total Word Count: 9,842
Resubmitting for approval.
Approval granted (and word/character count adjusted.) Welcome to the EPD.
For the section prior to the disappearance of Casey Jones, a Particpation bonus is in order. That would be posts 1 through 9, for which your word count and character count were 5,910 and 34,154 respectively. So, at 50%, that's an additional +341.54.
I waffled a bit on whether to give you an exceptional writing bonus as well, but as much as I love your prose, the false starts lacking clean segues broke the flow too much. You killed it on the ending - Kopaka's wholehearted descent into bloodthirsty madness is chilling (appropriately enough), and the contrast between his lust for violence and the cultists' welcoming pacifist resistance was stark and unsettling - but I've gotta be as objective as I can.
Kopaka: + 341.54 OM
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