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Move Creation Workshop
(12-14-2017, 04:06 AM)Alex Mercer Wrote: The only difference from the original is the inclusion of length and the omission of speed or damage.
I also omitted the 'half your DEF' thing, since you don't need such a big drawback for such a simple move.

EDIT: Oh yeah, from the Original, not the edited version.

Yeah, you're right. For simple physical moves like this, knowing the dimensions & appearance is more important than explicitly stating the energy costs.

Also, if you want to go with Eb's suggestion and include a more precise durability measurement, instead of saying 'The claws are slightly less durable than normal daggers', as I wrote in my previous example, you could instead go with 'The claws are about as durable as if they were made from copper' ... though you could substitute the word 'copper' for tin, aluminium or any other weaker-than-steel metal of your choice.
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Move Creation Workshop - by Omni - 07-25-2015, 03:25 AM
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