12-04-2017, 08:30 AM
(12-03-2017, 04:36 PM)Jams Bolero Wrote: Time for a revise~
Violet Arm
300 OM
Requires:
-Physical Strength Proficiency
-Telekinesis
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Jams utilizes his ability to manipulate gravity in order to enhance his fighting ability. This method involves him applying gravitational force to his arms, and thus applying force to whatever gets in their way.
APPEARANCE: Jams punches in a given direction, his arm enveloped in a purple glow which blurs forward along with his fist. The more gravity that is applied, the stronger the purple glow around his arm. While he uses purple magic, the irises of his eyes turn purple, the shade of which also determined by how much force is applied.
UTILIZATION: Jams punches, simple enough. The strength of the punch is based on how much force he uses.
[Pros]
-Deals more damage per hit
-Can be used to move heavy objects
-Used to balance if unsteady
[Cons]
-Stronger punches are more obvious
-Improper winding up can disorient the user and potentially cause harm
-Overexertion of magic is always a risk, use with caution
OTHER NOTES: Jams would probably take about a half to 2/3 of a second to punch by default.
You know how sometimes moves can be variable? The wording of this move sounds variable, but you've kept it pretty vague. [I've bolded the words that made it seem variable to me.]
I have some ideas for how you can make it more specific, but you're welcome to try and make it have only a fixed method of use. For example: You could have a weak punch with a 1 second wind-up and a stronger punch with a 10 second wind-up.
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