11-23-2017, 09:27 PM
@ Morene:
Galvanus: What do you mean by "after a few seconds of vulnerability" in the third paragraph, exactly? (Is she unable to defend herself, stuck in place, etc.?) Must Morene concentrate very much to reel it in?
Vortex: How much effort does this take to use? If you want it to be really powerful like what you've written, you'll need greater drawbacks such as fatigue, longer charge times, etc.!
Galvanus: What do you mean by "after a few seconds of vulnerability" in the third paragraph, exactly? (Is she unable to defend herself, stuck in place, etc.?) Must Morene concentrate very much to reel it in?
Vortex: How much effort does this take to use? If you want it to be really powerful like what you've written, you'll need greater drawbacks such as fatigue, longer charge times, etc.!
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