11-22-2017, 10:53 PM
@Matt:
"The pistol whip does a high amount of damage to anyone unfortunate enough to get cracked upside the head, akin to a knock out blow from a boxer when properly delivered to an opponent."
Damage is based on your ATK. Thus, even if your ATK fits that description, it shouldn't be used in the move since your stats can change. Also, it's a standard melee attack, you don't need to include a description of strength. That's what your ATK is for. In other words, just delete the entire last sentence. Also, I don't see any reason why the damage for a pistol whip should be "high". It's the same as a normal punch in terms of usage and drawbacks.
Also, with regards to "the lasers do a mild amount of damage", it's also better to write something like "The lasers are moderately strong." Since, damage is stat based, simply saying "power" or "strength" is clearer. Describing the rough power of moves isn't actually needed though, but it can help to show what you're aiming for. So, really, you can remove both parts about "damage" if you want.
Lastly, as I said before:
"The pistol whip does a high amount of damage to anyone unfortunate enough to get cracked upside the head, akin to a knock out blow from a boxer when properly delivered to an opponent."
Damage is based on your ATK. Thus, even if your ATK fits that description, it shouldn't be used in the move since your stats can change. Also, it's a standard melee attack, you don't need to include a description of strength. That's what your ATK is for. In other words, just delete the entire last sentence. Also, I don't see any reason why the damage for a pistol whip should be "high". It's the same as a normal punch in terms of usage and drawbacks.
Also, with regards to "the lasers do a mild amount of damage", it's also better to write something like "The lasers are moderately strong." Since, damage is stat based, simply saying "power" or "strength" is clearer. Describing the rough power of moves isn't actually needed though, but it can help to show what you're aiming for. So, really, you can remove both parts about "damage" if you want.
Lastly, as I said before:
Quote:>Can he move while preparing it, and does that require focus?