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Move Approval V
(05-27-2018, 12:53 AM)The Future Warrior Wrote: Ah, hmm. Yeah, think I will do that. Drop the charge time to about six seconds or so. Thanks much, friend. More incoming:

Fire Gun -- 300 OM (Requires: Ranged)
[spoiler]Vivian holds up the index and middle fingers of either or both of his hands, similar to a child making a finger gun, and over a second a small ball of fire about two inches in diameter forms at his fingertips. Once formed, he can use it much like an actual gun, firing small bolts of fire -- about an inch in diameter and three inches long, vaguely resembling a small comet. They can be fired quite rapidly, one 'bullet' of fire from each hand every half a second. Their effective range is up to 30 meters before they fizzle out, within that range they hit with a small burst and searing impact, and they pack a similar speed to bullets from the handguns they imitate. Individually they inflict only minor damage, relying more on volume of fire to deal any serious harm. There is an almost negligible stamina drain for each shot, though given the rate at which they can be fired and the sheer amount often fired to pin down, harass, or actually damage foes, even that minor drain can add up. When done firing, Vivian blows out the flames at his fingertips like a candle, taking only half a second per hand.[/spoiler]

Suffocate -- 300 OM (Requires: Area Defense)
[spoiler]Vivian focuses and builds up energy over five seconds, during which period he can move to try and dodge attacks as normal but not much else, before letting it loose in an aura around him. It takes the form of concentrated heat, which shimmers and gusts around him in sharp, focused gusts swirling masses, reaching out to about six feet away. The affected area becomes a virtual desert, the moisture and air near completely choked out and strangled with the intense heat. It forms an effective shield, forcing foes to keep their distance lest they begin to suffocate or dehydrate from the heat and lack of air. Its primary function is to distort and destroy proejctile attacks, with weaker ones being crushed, burned or fizzled out by the drastic, oppressive environment, and stronger ones being partially melted, blunted or blown off course of a direct impact to lessen their impact and damage. It's intended to mitigate damage rather than stop it outright. The effects last for about fifteen seconds, and carry a moderate stamina drain along with them.[/spoiler]

Eruption -- 300 OM (Requires: Ranged, Ranged Materialize, Area Attack)
[spoiler]Vivian crouches down, resting his hand against the ground. Over the next three seconds, he focuses and gathers energy, before releasing it in the form of a huge pillar of intense flames, ten feet in diameter, centered on any point within thirty meters. It packs a significant punch, capable of throwing anything caught within it dozens of feet into the air. Aside from its damage it doesn't do much else. The stamina drain is fairly minor for the nature of the attack, given how much absolute focus and concentration goes into it; Vivian is completely open and vulnerable while preparing it, and even a fairly minor hit will ruin his concentration.[/spoiler]

Firefly -- 300 OM (Requires: Ranged, Area Attack)
[spoiler]Vivian holds out his hands, fingers spread, and slowly forms a small ball of fire at the tip of each one. It takes about two seconds per finger to form them, and while he can move about freely while preparing this attack, taking even a minor hit will disrupt the delicate focus needed. Once he had reading all ten fingers, he can begin the actual attack: letting the gathered fire break apart and fly off to hover around him, forming a three-meter radius cloud of glimmering motes of shining green flame, similar in appearance to fireflies. Once they have been formed, these sparks will follow him and maintain their relative position, lasting for up to a minute. Anyone aside from Vivian who comes into contact with them will trigger an explosion roughly two feet in diameter, and while each individual one deals only moderate damage, the likelihood of triggering just one is almost nonexistent. Vivian himself is uneffected by these explosions, though he also cannot set the fireflies off himself. This attack actually has a surprisingly high stamina drain, and requires intense focus to properly prepare and execute it.[/spoiler]

Burn with me! -- 300 OM (Requires: Physical Strength, Area Attack)
[spoiler]A simple technique which involves Vivian either grabbing hold of his target, such as with a grapple or simply a crushing hug -- or similarly being grabbed by his opponent, or otherwise in similarly close proximity. When in such a position, he simply flares a massive amount of heat and seemingly immolates himself, his entire body being covered in flames. While this does no damage to him, whoever he's sharing a special moment with won't be so lucky, as the flames blaze and flare up around him in a two meter radius, four meter tall conflagration which tends to melt and burn through the ground while active. It takes three seconds to activate, and the massive blaze lasts for another three seconds. All it requires is time to gather the energy, and minimal focus, so he can't really be interrupted even with damage, but the stamina drain is appropriately high for the power of the attack.[/spoiler]

Fire Gun: Approved.

Suffocate: Does this impact other people close to you? Like burning them, or just making it hard for them to act effectively in the heat? Since I know it's intended just as a shield, but it's worded like it probably would hurt people as well. If so, you'll need area attack and/or maybe debuff as well (depending on what it does), and a little description/clarification that it harms people as well. Or, just say it's only uncomfortable for people there (but not outright debilitating) and it just damages projectiles.

Eruption: Approved.

Firefly: Approved.

Burn with me!: Approved


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