Random Notes and Thoughts:
-I try to judge off of three main things: Writing Style/Formatting (narrator usage, how the writing is presented), Dialogue (both internal and external), and Creativity (the actual content of the roleplays). Level Difference and Damage are the stat elements I like at.
-Great fight! I like all of your moves and it was fun to really get to know two characters that I otherwise never would have really paid attention to. Thanks for the fun thread and for letting me be a part of it!
-From a technical standpoint, looking at it strictly from the game point of view, it was very even. Yuuka has a slight level advantage. I originally had the damage tied but after thinking about it and reading over Yuuka's last move (Master Spark), I decided that Cirno had to be given some kind of advantage for the huge speed gap there. Overall it ended up being a difference of 1 in the damage category.
-From a writing standpoint, I had some issues reading Cirno's roleplays. The formatting made it difficult to keep track of where my eyes were going. I would have liked the paragraphs not to be double-spaced and spread out so thinly. The first intro roleplay was fine but then formatting issues made it difficult for me to not be distracted.
-Dialogue was great on all ends. Both of you have a good handle on your own characters plus each other's. There were some minor issues where I wasn't totally sure it sounded believable, but I chalk that up to not really knowing the source material.
-This didn't effect the fight, but just a random note: Cirno please make sure you let everyone know that you're starting in your alternate form. If you said it somewhere then I missed it. I had to go back and adjust when I realized you started as your alternate. Yuuka, please make sure you add your power-up stats to your main roster page.
-Here is how it went down from a stat POV:
Judging Criteria:
Level Difference: Yuuka by 1
Damage: Cirno by 1
Writing Style: Yuuka
Dialogue: Yuuka
Creativity: Tie
I judge this fight to be won by Yuuka Kazami. You may decide to either kill or release Cirno, in an IC post or in the OOC thread.
Congratulations Yuuka and well done to both of you!
-I try to judge off of three main things: Writing Style/Formatting (narrator usage, how the writing is presented), Dialogue (both internal and external), and Creativity (the actual content of the roleplays). Level Difference and Damage are the stat elements I like at.
-Great fight! I like all of your moves and it was fun to really get to know two characters that I otherwise never would have really paid attention to. Thanks for the fun thread and for letting me be a part of it!
-From a technical standpoint, looking at it strictly from the game point of view, it was very even. Yuuka has a slight level advantage. I originally had the damage tied but after thinking about it and reading over Yuuka's last move (Master Spark), I decided that Cirno had to be given some kind of advantage for the huge speed gap there. Overall it ended up being a difference of 1 in the damage category.
-From a writing standpoint, I had some issues reading Cirno's roleplays. The formatting made it difficult to keep track of where my eyes were going. I would have liked the paragraphs not to be double-spaced and spread out so thinly. The first intro roleplay was fine but then formatting issues made it difficult for me to not be distracted.
-Dialogue was great on all ends. Both of you have a good handle on your own characters plus each other's. There were some minor issues where I wasn't totally sure it sounded believable, but I chalk that up to not really knowing the source material.
-This didn't effect the fight, but just a random note: Cirno please make sure you let everyone know that you're starting in your alternate form. If you said it somewhere then I missed it. I had to go back and adjust when I realized you started as your alternate. Yuuka, please make sure you add your power-up stats to your main roster page.
-Here is how it went down from a stat POV:
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Cirno starts out in her alternate form (4/4/0/2)
Yuuka starts out in her base form (6/2/0/4)
Cirno (4 ATK) uses T1 SA (Icicle Fall) on Yuuka (2 DEF) for 3 damage
Yuuka uses T1 Transformation (8/4/0/5)
Cirno switched to her base form (2/2/5/1)
Cirno (2 ATK) uses T1 SA (Icicle Fall)on Yuuka (4 DEF) for 1 damage
Yuuka is now back in her base form (6/2/0/4)
Yuuka (6 ATK) uses T1 SA (Master Spark) on Cirno (2 DEF, 5 SPD) for 3 damage (was 4, took 1 damage off for huge SPD advantage)
Both fighters accrue an additional 2 damage overall from wear and tear.
All SP used. Cirno 5 damage, Yuuka 6 damage
Judging Criteria:
Level Difference: Yuuka by 1
Damage: Cirno by 1
Writing Style: Yuuka
Dialogue: Yuuka
Creativity: Tie
I judge this fight to be won by Yuuka Kazami. You may decide to either kill or release Cirno, in an IC post or in the OOC thread.
Congratulations Yuuka and well done to both of you!