11-17-2017, 10:41 AM
(This post was last modified: 11-17-2017, 10:42 AM by Ebonywood Hellscythe.)
@Gunther:
FLDSMDFR Cannon:
>Meatball is good.
>Ice Cream will need telepathy, since you're making people act in a way they wouldn't usually (eating ice cream). I think it also needs a rough area of effect.
>For the Potato, you might want to make it clear that it actually does damage.
>For the Shrimp, I think you should say how big massive is, and it also needs a rough speed.
FLDSMDFR Twin Pistols:
I think this is good. But give it a quick once over with the checklist (see the rules/top post of move approval) before you send it to approval just in case.
FLDSMDFR Pump Action:
>I know we assume range now (to being until it hits something), but I'm picturing potatoes with a curved trajectory, so I think you should add one.
>For dried beans, you should have a rough angle/width of the cone.
>Hot dog is good.
>Spaghetti is good.
FLDSMDFR Cannon:
>Meatball is good.
>Ice Cream will need telepathy, since you're making people act in a way they wouldn't usually (eating ice cream). I think it also needs a rough area of effect.
>For the Potato, you might want to make it clear that it actually does damage.
>For the Shrimp, I think you should say how big massive is, and it also needs a rough speed.
FLDSMDFR Twin Pistols:
I think this is good. But give it a quick once over with the checklist (see the rules/top post of move approval) before you send it to approval just in case.
FLDSMDFR Pump Action:
>I know we assume range now (to being until it hits something), but I'm picturing potatoes with a curved trajectory, so I think you should add one.
>For dried beans, you should have a rough angle/width of the cone.
>Hot dog is good.
>Spaghetti is good.