11-15-2017, 11:20 AM
@Little Ghost:
Your move works, but in my opinion it's full of too much description fluff. Someone's going to read it trying to figure out what it does, and have to basically feel like they're decrypting it.
From what I gather, LG is using burst movement and hitting someone really hard with a melee weapon.
Your move works, but in my opinion it's full of too much description fluff. Someone's going to read it trying to figure out what it does, and have to basically feel like they're decrypting it.
From what I gather, LG is using burst movement and hitting someone really hard with a melee weapon.