11-14-2017, 07:01 PM
@ Ryu:
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Approved.[/spoiler]
@ Koal:
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Approved.[/spoiler]
@ Matthew:
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That's a really long cooldown time. Maybe just say Matt's fatigued after executing this move. "Fifteen seconds to perform" is also crazy long, I'd be satisfied with just 7 seconds.[/spoiler]
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(11-14-2017, 01:30 PM)Ryu Hayabusa Wrote: Blade Fury - Requirements (Physical Strength, Super Speed) Cost: 300 OM
Ryu starts by spinning up like a top and placing his sword parallel to the ground. At his maximum speed, he becomes just a whirling blur of black and silver. He can easily deflect incoming small attacks however any powerful attack might just knock him out of the move entirely. This attack falls under the “death by 1000 cuts” philosophy. While no cut is overly powerful, they will start to add up if his opponent just sits still while Ryu performs this move. The opponent is more than able to dash away or jump back. While Ryu can pursue most of his concentration is on keeping his circular momentum so his movement in any direction is slowed down to a crawl, so Ryu will try his best to use this move when already close to his foe. While he doesn’t need to say anything to perform this move, he might simply scream the name or he might simply scream in general as the forces that are pulling on his body don’t feel great. The attack last about 5 seconds, with the ninja being able to slow his momentum sooner then that is needed. Afterwards, he will need time to readjust himself as the world will be spinning. He is wobbly, so his defenses and movements will be slow as he readjusts to the world.
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@ Koal:
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(11-14-2017, 05:56 PM)Koal Wrote: Heaven’s Wrath (Requires Ranged, Area Attack) Cost: 600 OM
A lightning based attack, this move can be used to throw highly volatile bolts of lighting at enemies and do AOE damage in high concentration (AOE is five foot radius around point of impact.) the bolts, Scarlet red in color, must be charged for a minimum of three seconds for basic effect, and can be charged for a duration of nine seconds for maximum effect. Koal is unable to use this move while in motion and must concentrate whilst charging the bolts. This move can only be used outdoors, or near a large source of electricity. The bolts themselves manifest in a bright crackle of energy between Koal’s hands, before they are thrown at a speed of ~60mph, and are thrown in a manner similar to a spear. In the event that Koal takes damage while charging his attack, the electricity will dissipate into his own body, harming him.
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@ Matthew:
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(11-14-2017, 06:02 PM)Matthew Mcginnis Wrote:Sword Art - Air Slicer (300 OM, Physical Strength)
This attack starts out with a dash towards his opponent, and then commences with an uppercut with his right hand holding the Fabricated Replica Soul Taker in one hand. Once the uppercut has sufficiently knocked them into the air, this sets them up for the next part of the move, the seven slashes with the sword. Upon completion this does a modest amount of damage to anyone who is hit by it. It takes him about ten seconds to charge up, and fifteen seconds to perform. Interrupting any part of the move could ruin the entire move. Furthermore, the move is moderately draining on his stamina, and has a 20 second cool down. The move requires that he have his sword, the Fabricated Replica Soul Taker equipped.
That's a really long cooldown time. Maybe just say Matt's fatigued after executing this move. "Fifteen seconds to perform" is also crazy long, I'd be satisfied with just 7 seconds.[/spoiler]
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