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Move Approval V
(11-13-2017, 12:58 PM)Guu Wrote:
Kaiju Guu - Tier 3 Power-up (2000)
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In a flash of light, Guu grows 50 feet tall. She appears in whatever outfit and form she was in at the time.

ATK: +7
DEF: +8
SPD: +3
TEC: +2

Edit: THAT'S MY FINAL EDIT!

Edit: OKAY NOW I'M DONE!

Dentist’s Nightmare (300) [float=right][Image: hTF16HV.png][/float] Ranged Proficiency, Area Attack Proficiency, Debuff Proficiency, Kaiju Guu
When in her Kaiju Guu form, and only in that form, she can fire large blasts of pure destructive energy from her mouth.
It only takes a second to charge up. It takes the shape of 30x30 feet tube that fires at a range of 3,000 feet before fizzling out. Because it can only be done in her Kaiju form, it only expends a little bit of energy to maintain it for 3 seconds, but after that it begins to massively drain her energy to continue firing. After halting the attack, she can’t do it again for another 30 seconds in order to recharge. Those that survive a direct hit from the assault suffer burns all over their body that hinder movement and inflict pain. Mental scarring inflicted from the attack is entirely optional to the player.


I confirm that Area Attack Proficiency will be purchased along side this move

Kaiju Guu approved. As for Dentist's Nightmare, needs:
Can the user move around or do other things while using/charging the move, or must they be stationary? Required for all moves except weapons that exist in real-life. Examples: "Can be used while moving at full speed." "Slows the user to half speed while using." "Must be stationary to use." "Can be used while moving, but splits focus, making it harder to aim and use at full strength."

The bolded part is problematic. If that's just a damage thing, which it sounds like, it should probably be entirely dependant on stat differences and not a part of the move itself. It's not that powerful of a move in of itself (it's a 1 second chargeup move with a gigantic radius, which means very diluted) so it shouldn't be that strong. If it's treated as a non-damage thing, a kind of magical debuff, it needs a duration.
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Move Approval V - by Jade Harley - 09-08-2017, 08:03 PM

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