02-04-2015, 08:37 AM
When using terminology from your show like "Hamon" try and explain because we don't automatically know what that means.
In simple terms, Dio freezes one of his own body parts. This allows him to block more effectively but he can't use it for other things. It deals light damage to himself. It also slows the opponent for one round (two posts). It also takes one second of windup. Is that correct? It may need a bit of rewriting because it was pretty confusing. It's also a bit strong for a move, really.
Oh and just as a side reference (for Guu as well as anyone else reading), it's generally best not to use entire rounds as a basis for a debuff. That's essentially a third of the entire fight and it kind of ignores word count too so it's a bit weird. Best to give a rough time frame, and then that can also be changed depending on your attack in the opponent's defence in a real fight. Like "a fully charged ice beam can freeze on opponent's limb for up to a minute".
In simple terms, Dio freezes one of his own body parts. This allows him to block more effectively but he can't use it for other things. It deals light damage to himself. It also slows the opponent for one round (two posts). It also takes one second of windup. Is that correct? It may need a bit of rewriting because it was pretty confusing. It's also a bit strong for a move, really.
Oh and just as a side reference (for Guu as well as anyone else reading), it's generally best not to use entire rounds as a basis for a debuff. That's essentially a third of the entire fight and it kind of ignores word count too so it's a bit weird. Best to give a rough time frame, and then that can also be changed depending on your attack in the opponent's defence in a real fight. Like "a fully charged ice beam can freeze on opponent's limb for up to a minute".
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