01-15-2017, 01:14 AM
Note: You should just edit all the new information into the original app (maybe make it bold as well, so I can find it easily).
History - okay
Physical Description - I know what it says. That mostly refers to the part where you have to write a detailed physical description of your Original character. For canon characters it is always common courtesy to put an image of your character.
Spirit Gun - Is the 20 second charge time the same as combining all three shots into one larger, stronger, shot? or are they separate?
You honestly don't need to limit yourself to only 3 shots. The cooldowns are still too high.
please make all the changes I've asked you to.
History - okay
Physical Description - I know what it says. That mostly refers to the part where you have to write a detailed physical description of your Original character. For canon characters it is always common courtesy to put an image of your character.
Spirit Gun - Is the 20 second charge time the same as combining all three shots into one larger, stronger, shot? or are they separate?
You honestly don't need to limit yourself to only 3 shots. The cooldowns are still too high.
please make all the changes I've asked you to.