Move Creation Workshop

[Ebonywood Hellscythe]

Updated once more:

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Changes made in bold.

Personal Gravity Manipulation (1200)
(Flight, Physical Strength)
Hijiri is able to alter the strength of gravity's effect on his body (and his weapons, clothes, etc.) to the extent of being able to become as light as a feather, as heavy as a tonne of bricks, or anything in between. These effects come with all of the associated up- and downsides you would expect.

For example: being extremely light would allow him to stand on fragile objects, be carried along by gusts of wind, and attack quickly, but would drastically weaken his blows due to the low weight behind them, and would allow him to be knocked or thrown around effortlessly by others, whilst being extremely heavy would make him harder to knock over and his attacks noticeably stronger, but would also make every movement he made more difficult and more tiring, as well as much slower.

Making himself lighter is instantaneous, regardless of the change in weight, and costs no energy. Making himself heavier requires one second of charge-up per 10kg of weight added (so increasing his weight from 'feather-like' to the maximum value of one tonne would take 100 seconds). This move drains his energy rapidly whilst charging. He is capable of moving whilst charging this, and can even begin an attack, however actually hitting (or being hit) by an opponent will interrupt the charge, and as no weight is added until he intentionally ends the charging period, this means that all progress will be lost, and his spent energy will have gone to waste.

In addition, maintaining this move drains his energy slowly. Cancelling it returns him to his original weight instantly, but can only be done intentionally when he is within 10kg of his original weight; meaning that if he is beyond that range then he must use this move again to get back within it before he can actually end the move.
This move will also automatically cancel when he loses consciousness or dies.

Hijiri can also have this move affect only part (or parts) of his body (e.g. an arm & a leg) if he wishes it to. Concentrating the effect in specific areas (or just one area) makes those body parts heavier than they would be if the weight were evenly distributed throughout his body, but at the cost of making it harder to actually land attacks, since the uneven weight distribution will put him off-balance.
Note that whilst making his entire body weigh an amount far beyond his capacity to endure (e.g. a tonne) would kill him instantly, doing the same to an individual hand or foot, for example, would merely pin him to the ground, break every bone in the affected appendage and cause him to experience excruciating pain.

Sorry Ebony, but I decided to stick with kg as the measurement. It may be technically wrong, but this whole thing sounds convoluted enough already without having to explain to the staff why I'm measuring his weight in newtons or kgf or some other measurement that no one ever actually uses on sets of scales because the only people who care about them are physicists...
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...I was kinda joking when I said the kg thing. People know what you mean, and that's what matters. I don't expect you to start using Newtons (or kg.m/s^2 or J/m or like a million other alternative units for force).

Anyway, I think you're good. Or, at least, near enough to good that there shouldn't be many problems in move approval. Just add a comment about price breakdown (300 for light, 300 for heavy, 300 for focused area, 300 for variable change), and make it obvious you're combining the two old moves.