Yes, but what you just wrote for that 300 OM move is fine. That's not a wall of text assaulting my eyes. As for your original concern about there being confusion between the roster version and the approved version; If you're adding a move to your roster before it's approved and purchased in your log, you're breaking the rules.
EDIT: You guys seem to be misunderstanding what we're having a problem with. We don't have a problem with fluff. We have a problem when you write 400+ words of it for a simple move.
EDIT: You guys seem to be misunderstanding what we're having a problem with. We don't have a problem with fluff. We have a problem when you write 400+ words of it for a simple move.