01-16-2017, 02:42 AM
Spirit Gun - Again, the 5 minute recharge time is way too long, if you really want a recharge time then I'd say anywhere between 10 - 30 seconds would be more appropriate.
Remove the part where you say "Can be redirected however from things like a mirror or crystal." as this would all depend on whether your opponent is using a move to deflect your move or has enough TEC to do so.
I don't really understand why you're limiting yourself with this move. The normal shots from this could be like firing a weapon and you could limit yourself to a sort of "clip size" which, after being expended, would need to be reloaded by taking a couple of seconds to gain more energy, then you could have the more intensive charged modes (which could cause him to have longer charge times.
If you want to keep the move as is (with the changes I've asked for) then that's fine, but if you'd like help writing it up, then shoot me a PM.
Remove the part where you say "Can be redirected however from things like a mirror or crystal." as this would all depend on whether your opponent is using a move to deflect your move or has enough TEC to do so.
I don't really understand why you're limiting yourself with this move. The normal shots from this could be like firing a weapon and you could limit yourself to a sort of "clip size" which, after being expended, would need to be reloaded by taking a couple of seconds to gain more energy, then you could have the more intensive charged modes (which could cause him to have longer charge times.
If you want to keep the move as is (with the changes I've asked for) then that's fine, but if you'd like help writing it up, then shoot me a PM.