10-24-2017, 05:30 PM
@Chara:
Thief:
>You don't need to state she can use the opponents moves you "stole", since mimic lets you do that anyway. You don't need a move for it. So reduce the cost to 300 and remove that part. You're solely stopping an opponent from using that item.
"The length of the stealing is ten seconds"
>Did you mean that it takes her 10 seconds to steal something, instead of that?
>Stopping someone being able to use a move for up to 10 minutes is too strong. Reduce the time or add drawbacks.
>Look at Demetri's stealing move if you need ideas.
>Try and reword and polish off the move when you make changes.
Celestial Bodies:
>You don't need a charge time since it's a super move, and since this is a super defence, you may need to use it instantly. So, that's better fodder to have for an attack. Just something to think about.
>Otherwise, it's probably good.
Thief:
>You don't need to state she can use the opponents moves you "stole", since mimic lets you do that anyway. You don't need a move for it. So reduce the cost to 300 and remove that part. You're solely stopping an opponent from using that item.
"The length of the stealing is ten seconds"
>Did you mean that it takes her 10 seconds to steal something, instead of that?
>Stopping someone being able to use a move for up to 10 minutes is too strong. Reduce the time or add drawbacks.
>Look at Demetri's stealing move if you need ideas.
>Try and reword and polish off the move when you make changes.
Celestial Bodies:
>You don't need a charge time since it's a super move, and since this is a super defence, you may need to use it instantly. So, that's better fodder to have for an attack. Just something to think about.
>Otherwise, it's probably good.