10-23-2017, 11:47 AM
@Matt:
I think you're basically there. I've just got a few comments/nitpicks on the explosive one.
>Add the fatigue back in, or say that it's no more tiring than firing a normal arrow.
Lastly, if I were you, I'd make the explosive arrow part of the main bow move and add it as a variant.
I think you're basically there. I've just got a few comments/nitpicks on the explosive one.
>Add the fatigue back in, or say that it's no more tiring than firing a normal arrow.
Quote:When an arrow is fired after being charged, it is the same as a normal one that would be fired with the Bow and Arrow.>Change this to the quote below (or something similar), since that current sentence implies explosive arrows aren't different from normal ones. What it should (probably) be saying is that the process of shooting an explosive one is exactly the same:
Quote:Firing a primed explosive arrow is exactly the same as shooting a normal one, barring the explosion (i.e. just as tiring, same range, same speed, etc.)
Lastly, if I were you, I'd make the explosive arrow part of the main bow move and add it as a variant.