10-23-2017, 09:54 AM
(This post was last modified: 10-23-2017, 11:24 AM by Ebonywood Hellscythe.)
I'll look at the full thing later. But one quick comment:
Explain. How can it be non-letal, but still cause a fair amount of damage? They're explosives, so that's going to need an explanation. Don't edit it into your move yet (we can sort that out later), I just want to know what you meant. Unless it was just a fluff comment.
(Ebony's Soul Strike is an example of something I consider non-letal. As is the "dark" element of Meta Magic: Elemental Blast - that's currently only on the Wiki-Page though, I'll buy it later but it is approved)
Quote:but has been limited so that it is strictly non-lethal, although it could cause a fair amount of damage to anyone who is hit by it.
Explain. How can it be non-letal, but still cause a fair amount of damage? They're explosives, so that's going to need an explanation. Don't edit it into your move yet (we can sort that out later), I just want to know what you meant. Unless it was just a fluff comment.
(Ebony's Soul Strike is an example of something I consider non-letal. As is the "dark" element of Meta Magic: Elemental Blast - that's currently only on the Wiki-Page though, I'll buy it later but it is approved)