10-19-2017, 06:18 PM
@Matt:
(Short comment: Changing your moves is fine, and I love that you're using the workshop for its purpose. It just means that new questions and comments may be added on my part after each itteration of the move as the function and core usage changes slightly. That's why there seems to be endless questions on my part.)
For clarity:
>Also, once summoned, does it have to be used instantly, or can he keep it on his arm?
>(if he doesn't have to use it straight away) Can he use other moves once it has been summoned, but before using it?
>What is the maximum range? (I asked the last few times)
To clarify (information you need to add/clarify is in bold. If something not in bold is incorrect, it means I misunderstood your move. So either I'm being dumb - which is reasonable - or you should try and change your move slightly to clarify this point better):
>It takes 10 seconds to summon the cannon.
>Matt can move while summoning the cannon.
>It then takes another 2 seconds to form over Matt's arm.
>The cannon looks like ______?
>There may or may not be a rest period where Matt can wait to fire. If there is a rest period, it's unclear whether or not he can use moves during it.
>It then fires for 8 seconds straight.
>The beam it fires has a 2ft diameter.
>The beam is silvery-black.
>The beam has a max range of ___
>The cannon vanishes after the 8 seconds of firing.
>The cannon is aimed before firing, but may/may not be able to be re-aimed while firing.
>Matt can move while firing the cannon???
>Firing the cannon is very tiring.
>Matt needs both hands to fire and aim the cannon.
>If Matt loses concentration during any of the timed stages, (e.g. tries to use another move, takes damage, etc.) the cannon vanishes (???)
Sidenote:
If the cannon fires for 8 seconds straight, it's not going to be as strong as a 1-second blast (since the damage will be spread out over the time - if you're going for a mega strong move, I'd decrease the time if fires for).
(Short comment: Changing your moves is fine, and I love that you're using the workshop for its purpose. It just means that new questions and comments may be added on my part after each itteration of the move as the function and core usage changes slightly. That's why there seems to be endless questions on my part.)
For clarity:
Quote:Any damage that he takes would disrupt the move when he has began to prepare it.What does disrupt mean here? Does it cause the weapon to vanish? Does it just cause the firing to stop temporarily? i.e. did you mean?
Quote:Any damage that he takes while summoning or using the weapon will cause it to vanish.
Quote:round 2 by 2 footThat's a tad contradictory. Don't you just mean 2ft diameter rather than 2ft by 2ft?
>Also, once summoned, does it have to be used instantly, or can he keep it on his arm?
>(if he doesn't have to use it straight away) Can he use other moves once it has been summoned, but before using it?
>What is the maximum range? (I asked the last few times)
Quote:The beam of energy is able to be re-aimed, before he fires the beam from it.>Does this mean it can't be re-aimed while firing?
To clarify (information you need to add/clarify is in bold. If something not in bold is incorrect, it means I misunderstood your move. So either I'm being dumb - which is reasonable - or you should try and change your move slightly to clarify this point better):
>It takes 10 seconds to summon the cannon.
>Matt can move while summoning the cannon.
>It then takes another 2 seconds to form over Matt's arm.
>The cannon looks like ______?
>There may or may not be a rest period where Matt can wait to fire. If there is a rest period, it's unclear whether or not he can use moves during it.
>It then fires for 8 seconds straight.
>The beam it fires has a 2ft diameter.
>The beam is silvery-black.
>The beam has a max range of ___
>The cannon vanishes after the 8 seconds of firing.
>The cannon is aimed before firing, but may/may not be able to be re-aimed while firing.
>Matt can move while firing the cannon???
>Firing the cannon is very tiring.
>Matt needs both hands to fire and aim the cannon.
>If Matt loses concentration during any of the timed stages, (e.g. tries to use another move, takes damage, etc.) the cannon vanishes (???)
Sidenote:
If the cannon fires for 8 seconds straight, it's not going to be as strong as a 1-second blast (since the damage will be spread out over the time - if you're going for a mega strong move, I'd decrease the time if fires for).