10-18-2017, 10:31 PM
Hello and welcome to the Omniverse! There's just a few things about your app that I'd like some clarification on, please.
As far as I can see, this move is pretty golden. All you need is a drawback, nothing too major. This can be things such as its difficulty to hit with, the long time it takes to charge, the limited number of times it can be used, the fatigue or harm it inflicts on the user, or otherwise.
Also, you said that the staff can be extended in two seconds, but how long does it take for it to retract back to normal size? Does it retract immediately after striking foes?
(10-18-2017, 09:15 PM)Mori Hui Wrote: Starting Moves:
Yeoui (600 OM)
Requires Physical Strength and Ranged Proficiency
Yeoui is the sacred staff of the monkey king, it takes the shape of a 5 ft stone staff. Mori can use this staff in two ways, firstly is using it in his use of the staff-centric martial art Pumba. He also uses it's ability to change it's size offensively by having it quickly extend itself and retract back to normal size. The extention itself can reach up to 50 meters and takes about 2 seconds to fully extend, it hits about as hard as one of Mori's own strikes.
As far as I can see, this move is pretty golden. All you need is a drawback, nothing too major. This can be things such as its difficulty to hit with, the long time it takes to charge, the limited number of times it can be used, the fatigue or harm it inflicts on the user, or otherwise.
Also, you said that the staff can be extended in two seconds, but how long does it take for it to retract back to normal size? Does it retract immediately after striking foes?
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