Bonus Request Topic/Quest Turn-in Topic

[Luci]

Yellow Beauty Burns Gold
Personal Storyline
Participating characters (please list):

Yang Xiao Long
Belle
Alexander Blakesley
Ms. Marvel

Total character count including spaces (*)
Total word count (*)

Yang Xiao Long 894 words/5009 characters
Belle 2656 words/15203 characters
Alexander Blakesley 2186 words/13051 characters
Ms. Marvel 868 words /4983 characters


(*Calculated in Google Docs)

So this thread was cool.

I award the Participation Bonus to all participants


OM EARNED
Yang Xiao Long 50.09
Belle 152.03
Alexander Blakesley 130.51
Ms. Marvel 49.83


A classic Nexus clusterfluff! Refreshing! The thread was very readable, enjoyable, and fun as frick. You guys write very well together, and I hope to see it again; Golden Girls looks exciting. The thing I liked the most about the thread is the characters; they are all very exciting and fun to read.

Yang you did what you do best, which is beat the snot out of people and look good doing it. You really are a great Yang, for so many reasons.

Belle was classy as always, effortlessly approaching an absurd situation and having the character address it rationally. It helps tighten the strings on the disbelief suspension machine. You took an anime-cliche (we are freinds now because of a fight) and made it relatable, down to earth, and realistic, just like your character.

Alexander Blakesly breaks from the tempo of the thread with a more detailed and tactical viewpoint, delivered so well it felt like I was watching a movie. I love Alexander's dialogue as well, super cool!

Ms. Marvel you made me laugh. Twice. I've got my eye on you...

*in the distance, the sound of Omnillium bonus-shells rings out like thunder*
-Kellyedit!